Collide: Chapter three, part two

[kyasuriin]

ooh, shiny new part.

Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry Potter fandom
Rating: NC-17 overall, this part is closer to PG.
Summary (for all parts): AU (Remus never went to Hogwarts). Everytime Remus gets close to someone, they start to uncover the truth about his strange disappearances and injuries. He can't stand the look on their face when

Comments

[momebie]

I can follow the line of logic that took them to horse tranquilizers, I can't follow what made them think it was a good idea. Unless of course, they've decided to go ahead and be rather unscrupulous like my characters. ;) Need to borrow Aed?

So what you're telling me is...I shouldn't read the next bit at work? Sweet! :p

[kyasuriin]

I can't follow what made them think it was a good idea

hrm.. desperation?

gah, I need to catch up with your nano & I'm sure I'd love to borrow some unscrupulous characters from time to time ;)

[momebie]

It's ok, I really don't expect anyone to keep up with it, especially not people also doing Nano. I've been asked to put it up in order when I'm done though, so I can let you know when I start putting up on SkyeHawke.

*pushes Aed* There, go be the scurge of someone elses brain for a while!

[a_fallen_sister]

I went back and read all the previous installments of this, and I'm well and truly hooked! This is such a good read. I think someone above said it best - the story flows in such a natural way and the dialogue is fantastic.

And I LOVE your Lily - you've done an excellent job of 'fleshing' her out and giving her an interesting career. I like this entire chapter, actually, for the creative and very realistic notion of Remus as a test subject at St. Mungo's.

Good luck with Nano! You're doing a great job.

[kyasuriin]

oh thanks so much *blushy* I'm glad you like Lily, it can be difficult sometimes in fic to make her into her own person without making her 'wife of..' and the like. :) Thanks again!

[sambethe]

Still reading and enjoying. :)

I have proper comments in my head but need to grab some time to write them out.

[kyasuriin]

I'm glad you're enjoying, it's always nice to see that people are reading :)

[graceland428]

Hehe... I like Sirius inviting Remus to his place to "rest." Yeah, right. Looking forward to the next part!

[kyasuriin]

hehe, sounds like you know Sirius too well ;) I'm glad you're liking it so far!

[vera_dicere]

yay- three more quaters!! i am absolutely in love with this story, just so you know. as i'm sure you've heard by now, the dialogue is fabulous and the storyline flows very well. i also really love your characterizations. i'm so picky about remus and sirius sometimes, but i really love what you've done with them. remus is still bookish and reserved, but not wimpy or boring, and he does have a social life. and sirius is just such a sweetheart, but not in a way that takes away from his inherent siriusness, if you know what i mean. it'd be interesting to see how regulus defeating voldy affected sirius' family life, if you go into that.

anyhow- keep it up! can't wait for more!! X3

[kyasuriin]

gah, I somehow missed replying to this comment! Bad Kat!
Thanks so much for your comment, I'm so flattered and yeah.. *blushes* I'm glad you're enjoying it, or were at this part, lol. I hope you still are :D