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kyasuriin in katcollides

Collide, Chapter two, part two

Nov 09, 2006 16:55

Sorry for the delay, all. Here's the next part. Thanks to everyone who has commented so far, encouragement and suggestions are always appreciated.

Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry Potter fandom
Rating: NC-17 overall, this part is closer to R.
Summary (for all parts): AU (Remus never went to Hogwarts). Everytime Remus gets close to someone ( Read more... )

collide

Comments 41

secretsolitaire November 9 2006, 23:01:47 UTC

Oh, Remus.

Another great chapter -- love the hints of back story you keep giving us!

kyasuriin November 10 2006, 03:08:56 UTC

I know! *hugs Remus* and thanks for reviewing :)

jazzonia November 9 2006, 23:14:10 UTC

Goodness! I love this concept. The understones of a bigger plotline, the internal conflict within my dear Remmy, and Sirius's characteristic boldness... -happy sigh- More, please!

kyasuriin November 22 2006, 19:25:33 UTC

thanks so much for commenting, I'm so sorry I didn't reply to this sooner, it somehow got lost! :o

molsymo November 9 2006, 23:31:01 UTC

oh, love love love love. i'm really hooked on this. poor sirius, why must remus be so self-sacrificing? looking forward to more:)

kyasuriin November 10 2006, 04:52:46 UTC

Remus is self-sacrificing...Because Remus is Remus, perhaps *smile* or because I like writing him that way, heh, either way :) I'm glad you're enjoying it so far & thanks so much for the comment!

skysparcz November 9 2006, 23:34:16 UTC

Ah, I've been waiting for this and it was very satisfying :) I'm dying for more, now...

kyasuriin November 10 2006, 04:56:22 UTC

ah, I'm glad it wasn't disappointing. For some reason I worried about this part. Probably because it's not as eventful as other parts. It does have its purposes though :) I'll try to get the next part done asap, so you're not dying for long.

daikon_kamen November 10 2006, 01:11:48 UTC

Very good, I'm really enjoying this!

Only a thing ,why does Sirius want Remus?
Unlike Sirius,Remus looks are nothing exceptional and we have read the books and know how special Remus is, but, for Sirius, he is only a nice guy he has just met.
I know this is a Remus P.O.V, and it can be difficult to explain Sirius thoughts,but I think it is something you should develop a bit further.

Good luck with the NaNo!

kyasuriin November 10 2006, 03:10:50 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying it :) It's funny that you should mention that because I can't exactly give you an answer at this point to the why Sirius finds Remus attractive thing, as it's something that is developed in later chapters and becomes something of a plotty thing. But no worries, it's dealt with later :)