Freakin'...I do not see how this is published. F'reals. I dunno, I tend to like more details than the "he said I said oh hay I'll stare at this table now for awhile" that seems to be goin' on here a lot, but STILL. THIS READ BAD.
Yeah, I mean, I try to be fair. In the places where she does include details beyond the basic 'See Spot Run' crap that most of the book seems to be composed of, I usually mention it.
She has the ability to write decent details. She's proven it. What I don't see is why she doesn't employ this ability more often. The times when she DOES, it just seems totally random.
As soon as I reached that line, I knew that no words could do it justice and it required an illustration to truly convey the sheer majesty of Edward winking.
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You did not just compare your wimpy-ass vampire reject to the goddamned Batman.
He fucking disapproves of your sparkly shenanigans.
I LOLed for real. That was the most awesome thing I read. Batman could eat Edward for breakfast. you rock.
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It is, after all, the truth.
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She has the ability to write decent details. She's proven it. What I don't see is why she doesn't employ this ability more often. The times when she DOES, it just seems totally random.
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It would be!
...he could show her a magic trick with a pencil.
(I just saw that movie for the first time today. Pretty much freaking amazing :D)
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Its presence would make Twilight 100% better.
(Ohgod, I know right? I freakin' love that movie.)
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I can't wait to see how you handle the sparkling.
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Hopefully with pictures!
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