&kf004. halcyon

[kataibates]

TITLE Halcyon
PAIRING Yewook
RATING PG
SUMMARY Beautiful days are fleeting, fragile things. Jongwoon realises truths, and spends a perfect night with Ryeowook.
A/N This was an experiment with a different style. It's poetry, nominally, but it reads mostly like prose.

Comments

[thundersquall]

OMG WAE SO PRETTY ;____; YOU ALREADY KNOW I LOVED THIS ♥

[kataibates]

B-BUT I LOVE YOU

[ayoshiari83]

for me, the words are kinda sophisticated but beautifully luxurious.

[kataibates]

Thankyou very much~ I think they sort of needed to be a bit pompous to fit in with the style, so I'm glad it turned out okay. ♥

[treegonometry]

Hi there, it's awkward lurker again 8D
I don't even know what to say. This, is just. It's just so beautiful and it pulls you in and it plays like stop motion in my head and i keep trying to skip forward to see what's going to happen but then your words (they completely defeat my short attention span) just pull it all back into focus and OMG THIS. THIS. AMAZING *wibble*.

The pacing and the words , the words and and the poetry style (I LOVE POETRY D:) and the way you broke it all into these small phrases and the metaphors and and and and and TT___TT

mindblown ;___; *kowtows*

[kataibates]

Hello again, good to see you~

I'm sorry that nothing really happens in this! ;~; Hee, but I'm glad you liked the choice of words -- crucial in a style like this, I think. And also glad that you liked the way it was broken down; I was a little worried about how the end result would go.

I really don't deserve your kowtowing!, but thankyou so much ♥

[treegonometry]

IMMA BE YOUR NEW STALKER 8D (Y) (Y)
.....except you know i stalk you. okay. 8D (Y)

[envybleedsgreen]

You're writing is absolutely gorgeous. You write with such a tender fierceness that is just barely held back. The emotions portrayed in this are so delicate that it seems that with another word it could be shattered.