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So whilst watching Strictly Come Dancing,
dreamersdare sends me a text. It goes like this:
dreamersdare: Darcey just called Craig ‘the boy’. My usual aversion to scd fic does not include domme Darcey. Just wanted to throw that out there.
kat_lair: lol lol darcey/gleb femdom with heels, trampling and cbt?
dreamersdare: Yes please, thank you very much
kat_lair:
Title: Balance
Author: Mistress
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There have been boys in the past who’ve made the mistake of thinking that waiting naked for her in her dressing room would be appealing. It’s not that she doesn’t like initiative - she appreciates it very much in certain circumstances - but something like that is just presumptuous. As if all they had to do was show up.
Foolish that.
Yes, this. Very much this. This was the line that drew me back at the end, because it adds layers (to me, anyway, there are whole worlds of meaning associated with this line about being a ballerina and the expectations that come with that and the world she moved in).
Anyway, thank you! That was a very pleasant end to my evening :D
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And yeah, obviously I can't write pwp and scene setting must occur. I'm so, so immensely pleased that you appreciated that particular section. I wasn't thinking about her status as a ballerina per se, it was more of a general stab at expectations placed on dommes as fulfillers of fantasy for the benefit of men - but it fits.
Thank you for your enthusiastic comment. And for getting me writing. And for the prompt/plot bunny too... I think. <3
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Totally empathise on the 'oh thank god, turns out I can still write this stuff'. There's an odd sense of achievement linked to it.
To be honest, they're not particularly my kinks either but I think the enjoyment comes from the fact that they do fit and therefore it all flows and there's nothing that jars with my perceptions.
With regard to the scene setting, I had a similar conversation with someone once (from the perspective of the author) and their response was "Well, its obviously a sign of how good an author you are that you've imbued things with meaning on a subconscious level without any overt intent". I thought that was delightfully complimentary (although also kinda untrue) so I shall pass it on to you :)
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