Torchwood Fic: the odds are there to beat

[kat_lair]

Title: the odds are there to beat
Author: Mistress Kat / kat_lair
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing/Category: Ianto/Jack, character/relationship study, introspective and angsty
Rating: R
Word count: ~5,800
Disclaimer: Not mine, only playing.
Timeline: Takes place during the latter half of season 1 and the very start of season 2.
Summary: Just because you accept

Comments

[sbs_01]

This was very good. Like the way you've got Jack and Ianto's thoughts and feelings down so well.

[kat_lair]

Thank you very much, I'm glad the their thoughts and feelings came through :)

[musicandjason]

This was good! I really liked when ianto snuck out of the bar. :)

[kat_lair]

Thank you! That moment feels a little heart-breaking for me... Glad you liked the story.

[nyoka]

Very, very nicely done. I really enjoyed your take on their relationship.

[kat_lair]

Oh thank you very much! This take on the relationship was what heeroluva specifically wanted, but I'm glad it worked.

[aviv_b]

Very nice look at Jack and Ianto. I like how Ianto accepts what Jack can give him and isn't all broken up by it not being more. I think that's a truer vision that the Ianto not being able to handle Jack view.

[kat_lair]

Thank you! That central premise of Ianto wanting more but accepting what he has was heeroluva's request, but I do agree with it. I'm glad you liked the story.

[alt_universe_me]

Loved it, especially the way you brought the beginning of it full circle towards the middle :)

[kat_lair]

Oh thank you so much! I had real issues with how to order the different scenes and my betas were really helpful with that. So yay, it worked!