Supernatural fanfic: every line is the second last

Sep 24, 2006 10:50

Oh Dear... You see I needed another fandom like a hole in the head. A fandom that finally broke my incest squick I needed about as much as a shotgun blast of rock salt in the head. Which, apparently, was a lot.

Title: every line is the second last
Author: Mistress Kat /
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virtualinsomnia September 24 2006, 19:52:04 UTC
Woohoo! You posted it! Still fabulous, even though this is the third time I've read it. That last line alway breaks me. *love*

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kat_lair September 24 2006, 20:20:11 UTC
*dances around the room* Thanks for all your help, hun. I am quite excited about this - my first SPN fic! *feels proud*

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mf_luder_xf September 24 2006, 20:13:11 UTC
Fantastic! Great flow and wording.

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kat_lair September 24 2006, 20:22:38 UTC
Oh thank you for reading and leaving such a complimentary comment.

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anakin415 September 25 2006, 00:29:26 UTC
welcome to special hell we have reserved your bunk - 3rd floor number 41 you are in excellent company - welcome home

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kat_lair September 25 2006, 10:12:53 UTC
Why thank you, I shall just unpack then. I hear the entertainment is excellent here... Now where's that naked mud wrestling show?

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innie_darling September 25 2006, 15:13:35 UTC
This is really lovely, particularly these lines: Dean’s never been the one to draw the lines, so it makes a weird kind of sense that he’s not the one crossing them either. To Dean all rules are arbitrary, except the ones Sam makes. It’s Sam who defines the parameters of their life, both in what they do and who they are, and Dean’s always been happy to follow him, as far as he would go and no further. Sam is poised above him, trembling, and even though it hurts to realise that for Sam this line is harder to cross than the ones that will surely come after, Dean won’t hold him back. He made the decision long ago to take this any way it was given. And the idea of hunting taking over everything is chilling and well done.

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kat_lair September 25 2006, 16:49:35 UTC
Thank you very much. It makes me squee with glee when people quote their favourite bits so it was fantastic to hear which part you liked. And I think "chilling" is what I was aiming for so yay! I'm very pleased you enjoyed the fic and thank you for leaving feedback, it means a lot.

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musesfool September 25 2006, 17:43:39 UTC
Oh, lovely - stark and achy and true.

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kat_lair September 25 2006, 20:28:21 UTC
Thank you. What a wonderful comment to receive. *feels special*

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