How can you tell if he's gay? - Chapter 1

[kat_h_chan]

Title: How can you tell if he's gay?
Pairing: Ohyass (others in the future?)
Summary: Okura searched for love... or something... in Johnny's and occasionally found Yasu's ass, but that doesn't mean that they found each other.
Rating: PG (for now, NC-17 later on)
Genre: romance (smut)
Warning: still unbetaed

Chapter 1

Comments

[effi_g]

I like it I like it!!
this is really cute, and I love that you don't over describe the scenes too, cause the way they approach each other is completely open to interpretation, except for the important bits of course, like Yasu's smile ^^ I could totally see ohkura's relief when he smiled.

I really do like your writing style for this, it's very much all revolveing arounf the inner workings of kura's head. And your way of writing his thinking style is wonderful ^^

I like Yasu so far too, lovely characterisation. Looking forward to more ^^

[kat_h_chan]

THANK YOU!!!!!
I am so happy that you like it!
I barely ever got complimented like that ///.///

I didn't want to taint the "natural quietness" okura seems to have, so probably this fic will continue exactly like that, but there will be many other things I plan to let happen ^^

[chiaki94]

I like it how you describe them, and also that it's all written from Ohkura's head with many thoughts and speculations! :)

[kat_h_chan]

Thank you for reading and commenting! <3
I'm really happy I didn't fail to let okura reach you ;-)
Please always feel free to critizise, too ^^

[mariapalitos68]

I really liked it! now I can´t wait for more!! *_* ♥!!

[kat_h_chan]

Thank you soooo much for reading and commenting!!!
I'm glad you liked it! <3

[kickingstunts]

Hi,
this is a pretty interesting fic ,
I like it :D ..

[kat_h_chan]

Thank you <3