Brainstorming

[kasuchans]

So I've had this idea for a really long Ryden, spanning from the bands formation to two years post-split. And I've had this one line running in my mind for a while now, and I wanted to get some thoughts. On just one line. Yes, I'm insane

Comments

[slashxmistress]

I like it. I like it a lot - it gives a very clear mental picture and puts you right in his emotional state.
Not bad for one sentence :)

[kasuchans]

Thanks, I was probably going to have it be a single-sentence paragraph in the story anyways. It's Ryan, and it's two years after the split, two and a half or so, and he's only just realizing what he had - and lost - with Brendon.

Also, I feel like you're stalking my past entries... O_o

[slashxmistress]

LOL-it's not that old :P -just trying to catch up on my f-list!

Besides-nobody commented and it IS a good sentence!

[kasuchans]

Haha S.T.A.L.K.E.R.

:D