~BSG: Terms of Endearment

[kastari]

She twisted down and to the left.

A groan escaped him.

“You like that?” she panted.

Their eyes were locked.

“Yes,” he rasped.  “A lot.”

A smile graced her face.

He closed his eyes, lost in the steady, rhythmic rocking of her hips.

Then she saw the word forming on his lips.

The amazing rolling motion halted abruptly.

“Don’t call me that.”

He opened his eyes

Comments

[defyingnormalcy]

LOVE this. It's smokin' HOT, and I could SO see Laura telling Bill not to call her baby. Awesome take on this week's prompt! ;D Well done you!

[akachankami]

hee, you leaving us hanging like that? XD great end line! and very hot 100 words! =D

[lacklusterfic]

OMG. I love this! How in sync they are; how she knows what he's going to say before he can even say it. Wonderful stuff! :-D

I have my own theory about what she'd rather be called, but the ambiguity here is so, so, so good... best to leave it just between the two of them. ;-)

[nixmom]

I love the ending. It mysterious and sexy. I love that we all get to have our own little theory as to what she whispered, and that is perfect.

[redrockcan]

Hee hee!! Such a wonderful little moment and I can totally see Laura stopping what she's doing and giving him the over the glasses stare!! Well, if she were wearing her glasses, that is!! LOL!! I like too how you leave the ending open to whatever the reader may think she whispered in Bill's ear. Plus I'll second lack's thought of how Laura knows what Bill is going to say before he says it. :)