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~BSG: Blind Eye

Jul 14, 2011 15:52

Title: Blind Eye
Author: kastari
Summary: They both turned one on each other.
Characters: Adama/Roslin
Rating: T
Timeframe: ‘The Eye of Jupiter’
Author’s Note: Written for the 67th ar_drabbles challenge. Prompt: Picture perfect
Additional Note: The screen cap posted for this challenge was my visual for this work. Thanks to frakcancer for holding my hand & ( Read more... )

adama/roslin, drabble challenge, ar_drabbles, fic, haiku, bsg, fanfiction, fiction

Comments 6

frakcancer July 14 2011, 23:13:16 UTC

I like the turn in the last line. He may not like her methods, but he'll never again let their disagreement reach pre-Kobol levels. He may argue with her in private, but he'll always show a united front with Laura.

akachankami July 15 2011, 00:28:11 UTC

that's so sarcastically true: there's no brig anymore in the picture

hollywobbles July 15 2011, 00:32:58 UTC

I agree with Frak, and that's quite the feat to cram enough into a haiku to fit a complete 180 in. Nicely done!

redrockcan July 15 2011, 01:27:42 UTC

Hail, hail the haiku!! You said it all in a few words!! You do remember that ep!! ;) I love it when Bill backs Laura up even when he didn't agree with what she'd done. That's our Admiral!!! :) Nice work my friend!! I am learning to love these little haikus!!

nixmom July 15 2011, 03:40:33 UTC

Rocking the haiku again, and with such style. Wonderful!