Comments | kassidy62: SPN story: The Other End (What's Left of You That I Don't Have), part 2

kassidy62

SPN story: The Other End (What's Left of You That I Don't Have), part 2

Jun 19, 2012 08:57

spn: that phone call, non-con, spn fanfiction, lilith, spn_illuminated, castiel, spn, bobby, ruby, hurt!sam, powers!sam, dean, writing, wincest, violence

Comments 16

dark_shadow85 June 19 2012, 15:28:50 UTC

Loved it!

kassidy62 June 19 2012, 21:58:46 UTC

I'm so glad!

vail_kagami June 19 2012, 18:17:58 UTC

Great story! I have such a thing for Sam with psychic powers. I also loved how you wrote Ruby - and Lilith was appropriately creepy, as she should be.

Also, the voicemail of doom is always such a very welcome bonus! I really enjoyed working with you for this story!

kassidy62 June 19 2012, 22:05:52 UTC

Lilith was a nasty something for sure, so naturally I sicced her on Sam. Ruby just grew as the story was developing, you know, what if she really was the kind of demon Ruby 1 claimed to be? I mean, I had no idea she wasn't until very late, truthfully.
I was thrilled to see that last piece of art, knowing it was done just for this story - it seriously made my day, and I like the roughness of it, actually - feels real. And oh Sam's face!!!
I do wish we'd had more time to work together but honestly, at this point I feel lucky I got it done at all, with everything going on. I was pretty determined, though - I'd hate to pull out after committing, and I'm glad it all worked out.

debbiel66 June 20 2012, 00:58:22 UTC

Oh wow, really, really well done! You made me want to go back to season 4, linger awhile....it reminded me of the days when Sam and Dean thought only about each other.

I'm not even sure what challenge this was for, but I'm so very glad you wrote it. ♥

kassidy62 June 20 2012, 12:35:42 UTC

at spn_illuminated, art prompts are posted and then authors get to claim them. Usually you get an extra piece of art or two, even banners and icons, sometimes, to fit the story, which is wonderful:) In this case, I actually preferred the sketch vail sent me as a 2nd piece, because it feels more emotional, and there's so much fun to see someone actually work on art with your story in mind!
So glad you enjoyed this. I struggled with it and am still very weird about it, I guess being too close and all, so it's wonderful to hear it worked for you!
I MISS when Sam and Dean thought about each other all the time. I think we need to get back to it, personally, and to hell with healthy smealthy grown up independence:)

fleeting_wings June 20 2012, 17:53:57 UTC

This was always what I had wanted from season 4 and 5. Omg, you're amazing and this was all kinds of heart-wrenching. The cock healing was awesomeee!

kassidy62 June 20 2012, 19:33:40 UTC

I'm so glad it worked for you! I at first ended it with Sam and Dean kissing, just that, and being interrupted by Ruby. I sent it off to a friend and she said said something about Ruby and her timing, so I read it again and decided I'd HAVE to add healing cock - I was already disappointed I hadn't really gotten Sam and Dean together until the end as it was!

mdlaw June 20 2012, 19:57:43 UTC

I really enjoyed how you resolved the voice mail. The way they just ignored it on the show always bothered me. m :)

kassidy62 June 21 2012, 01:03:58 UTC

It bothered me a LOT that the show never talked about the voice mail, or let it be known who let Sam out of the panic room. I mean, do you think Sam still thinks his brother said that garbage to him? It's so sad. Glad you liked!