Fic: Keep It Precious (Juliet/Kate)

Sep 14, 2009 18:02

Keep It Precious

The world twists and turns and bends at the edges and suddenly nothing’s like before. The ground shakes and there’s a steadily intensifying drum in your ears.

She slips and falls and suddenly she is gone and the world stops turning and shaking and everything just freezes for a moment. She’s gone and you’re still there ( Read more... )

juliet/kate, femslash, lost, fanfiction

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ladywilde80 September 14 2009, 17:07:08 UTC
So freakin' beautiful. I love the use of the 2nd person here. Very lovely, gave this whole fic a really lyrical, haunting tone.

:) Awesome

Not enough fic for these two, not by a long shot. xoxo

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mysensitiveside September 15 2009, 00:22:26 UTC
But here you are and you saw her and even though you never got her back it feels like you lost her all over again.

Awww. :( This was tragic, but in a really beautiful way.

Great job!

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xejanfan September 15 2009, 05:00:17 UTC
love this pairing! and i love the way you tell their stories... spot on characterizations! great job, look forward to more! thanks for sharing!

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