NaNoWriMo - Fullmetal Alchemist Fanfic - Chapter 12

[kashiwrites]

(See Chapter 11)

On the morning after Roy’s rough night, Maes got up and stuck around while Roy continued his deep, heavy sleep. The stricken man had finally managed to nod off, his tremors and the “night shadows” subsiding, about three hours after Maes had come to the house. His slumber hadn’t been entirely perfect even in the three hours since

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[eranith]

"And how they’d deceive Hawkeye about this, he really wasn’t sure." She was in Ishbal, too. Even if she doesn't get it that bad, she'd still have the occasional bête noire. She could understand to a better extent than the others would be able to.

"Maes would wonder, even years later, if there was something he should have seen, should have noticed in Roy’s behavior at breakfast that morning, that might have alerted him and given him the chance to change things." . . . O_O I'm trying to search my mind for all possibilities, because you said I was close before, but I can't think of anything new. This just highlights that Roy holds the key, somehow