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karnimolly

Ficlet - "Dusty Windows"

Aug 07, 2010 01:01

About Atsuyo (Divine's and Aki's son) and Yusho (Yusei's "son").
One'd probably need more information on them before reading this one, but let's make it short and assume for a moment Divine didn't die, Aki stood with thim, and the Arcadia Movement has grown to become a serious threat.
Divine's son has taken over the leadership of the AM, while Yusei' ( Read more... )

fanfiction, cardgame faggotry

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dj_madusa August 6 2010, 23:15:24 UTC

rawr! WRITE MOAR!
lol did my pic inspired this ficlet? |3

karnimolly August 6 2010, 23:16:56 UTC

Nope, I wrote it before I even mentioned it to you, that's why I was so surprised to see you drawing fanart of it! <3

dj_madusa August 6 2010, 23:20:46 UTC

lol i guess it's like the old saying goes "great minds think alike" |3 this is definitely a yaoi coupling i could love x3

speaking of gay couplings, did you see my last pic i sent you on DA?

pandir August 6 2010, 23:27:56 UTC

The heat rushed through him, pushing out everything else, every thought, every single one of his clever thoughts was erased, rinsed by the sound of his heartbeat throbbing in his ears and the feeling of the skin of his palms slowly getting wet.

This conveys the feeling so wonderfully, I really love it, together with the mention that he didn't feel anything like that since he was a child. It gives an impression of how a wave of emotions as strong as this has to hit him and how he craves it.

And it was heat and sweat and fury and joy

LOVE. In caps.
GOD, I don't think it is possible that these two can get any hotter! For me, they reached the top of the scale.
Just rrrrr~
There's nothing like unresolved sexual tension resolving into rough sex! *_____*

And their little dialogue is very enjoyable. Just the kind of conversation I have a weakness for. <3

Conclusion: I ship the hell outa this.

Besides, I love the setting and the title. Empty buildings~

karnimolly August 7 2010, 14:43:46 UTC

Ich mein im Grunde haben wir in den beiden einen netten Vierer vereint: Divine/Aki/Sherry/Yusei *gigglesnort*

immicolia August 7 2010, 13:24:32 UTC

Eeee! Hatesex. One of my favourite things to read about. I wish to know more of these boys' backstories. Immediately. :D

karnimolly August 7 2010, 14:26:54 UTC

Thanks, glad you like it X33 ( ... )

immicolia August 7 2010, 15:58:57 UTC

The "everybody dies" fact of this is really kinda amazing and wonderful. Because I am, in fact, a horrible person. But the important question to me, because I'm obsessive is what about Crow.

Yusho is seekritly Team Ragnarok guy. I am suddenly wishing for AU of your AU where he really is Team Ragnarok guy traveling back in time for some reason. With his boyfriends. disregard me, I'm insane

DevArt's stupid mature content filter won't let me see teh slash picture. *sad* (I'm not sure why I'm so opposed to getting an account there, I just am. Probably because I really have no artistic talent anyway and it seems silly to sign up just to look at things)

karnimolly August 7 2010, 16:06:07 UTC

I love "everyone dies" stories a lot (probably why I like X-1999 so much. Especially the movie is hysteric XDXD).
What I find funny about this is that I seem to be unable to write happy stories for the children of my über-OTP o__o°
It's much more fun this way anyway, so whatevs.

@Yusho being Team Ragnarok guy: Sounds nice. Why? *3*

Oh, ok, wait...
Here you go ^^
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc44/spamus/Untitled-1-3.png
*gigglesnort*

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