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Fic: Edward/Seth: Concessions

Feb 18, 2009 01:19

Title: Concessions
Pairing: Edward/Seth
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Graphic Sex, church!sex
Summary: Edward makes a pitstop on the way to the reception. Unbeta'd, so beware typos and the like. I wrote this in about fifteen minutes as part of a challenge by my friend rtwofan, who decided we should have a quick porn-writing competition :D I won.

( He didn't mind. At all. )

fandom: twilight, pairing: edward/seth, !fic, rating: nc-17, (user) latex_muffins

Comments 35

heart_to_words February 18 2009, 06:58:07 UTC

HOLY CRAP.

i definitely NEVER thought of this slash, but DAMN you wrote it well. kudos.

latex_muffins February 19 2009, 02:46:24 UTC

Thanks!
I love Edward/Seth! :D:D

courtaline February 18 2009, 19:14:01 UTC

This was the most vividly erotic story that I've read ever. That I can think of in the immeditate present.

Not that I'm thinking logically. The imagery was crisp, and if their were any typos the descriptive language distracted me from them.

/dies

latex_muffins February 19 2009, 02:47:13 UTC

YAY!
I WROTE THE MOST VIVIDLY EROTIC STORY YOU CAN REMEMBER

what you don't know is the story was laced with drugs to make you forget all other hot smut

kapellmeister February 18 2009, 19:50:17 UTC

Haha. Nice. I will concede; that was pretty hot. I just spotted one typo.

"the small so small and tight and hot that he wanted to never leave"

I'm not sure what you wanted there, but it wasn't really distracting. This was very well written. :P

latex_muffins February 19 2009, 02:47:50 UTC

yay!
and okay, one typo i can deal with.

tybb!
as you know, it was written in a quickie porn competition :P

kapellmeister February 19 2009, 03:47:32 UTC

It's especially nicely done given the time constrants you were under. It'd take me hours to write something of this length. But I'm super indecisive. You've seen my drafts.

latex_muffins February 19 2009, 04:03:37 UTC

haha, yeah.
i couldn't possibly do that.
you have like...fs;dlkfjs;ldfj poriv r0vhsdlvnds;ivjs;f all over your paper!

rtwofan February 19 2009, 04:45:51 UTC

Niiiiiiice.

Yours definetly wins the imagery contest.

Mine was sort of rough and short and humphumphump, ROFL.

But this was deep and erotic.

WIN.

latex_muffins February 19 2009, 04:57:37 UTC

Yay!
I beat you at quick!sex!fic :D

oh, the eroticism.

twilightscribe February 19 2009, 05:34:56 UTC

*wiping at the blood still dripping from her nose* Now THAT was hot. And made my English homework seem so trivial once it was done; and I BS-ed my way through it.

Eeeeekk! I am very happy, if you haven't realized that; porn does that to me. XD

Though, I noticed one inconsistency... seeing as Edward's dead and like an icy rock, wouldn't the inside of him be just the same?

latex_muffins February 19 2009, 12:02:14 UTC

Yeah, I thought about that, but it would have killed the steamy imagery to make the inside of his ass a cold puckering hole.

latex_muffins February 19 2009, 12:02:45 UTC

But thank you for the feedback!

Sorry haha, I read that it seemed really asshole-ish of me.
:)

twilightscribe February 20 2009, 00:14:48 UTC

You are welcome for the feedback. Good porn is hard to come by. XD I like. A LOT.

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