Fic: Rosalie/Emmett: The Monster

[kapellmeister]

Title: The Monster
Pairing: Rosalie/Emmett
Rating: PG for minor violence
Summary: Rosalie is hunting and hears a noise. Couldn't change anything, right? Written for mission_insane  fic challenge (Theme- Angst- Broken)

Comments

[massrie]

Excellent! I enjoyed this, Rosalie's struggle to not kill him, and Emmett's first glance of the angel who saved him. Well written, I hope to see more by you.

[kapellmeister]

Thank you. I had fun writing it. :-)

[latex_muffins]

God, the writing style SCREAMS YOUR NAME.

good thing I like it then, hunh?
;P

[kapellmeister]

Haha. Yes, it is a good thing. :-) Just for reference, what about it screams my name?

[latex_muffins]

I'm not sure exactly. Just the way you write, and I suppose your verb/adjective choice I'm very familiar with. having read/beta'd nearly all of your fics, lol. I mean, compare this fic to To Run from Regret....the word choice is similar, the tone is similar, the sentence structure is similar.

It's so...you.

[kapellmeister]

I try to vary sentance structure. :D And I can recognize your writing style as well now.

[paynesgrey]

Guh. This was just fantastic. I love E/R. You portrayed this moment so perfectly. The language is just fluid and just draws you in. Great job.

[kapellmeister]

Thanks! Once again, I spent forever working on this rather than doing my math homework. Emmett/Rosalie takes backseat alot in the Twilight!Fandom, but I think their relationship is just as real as any of the other Cullens. -hugs Emmett- Positive feedback is encouraging and comments give me warm fuzzies!

[heart_to_words]

wow, that was amazing! you wrote it beautifully and you captured the characters and the scenario so perfectly. i'll be keeping up with your writing from now on. :]

[kapellmeister]

Thank you! I'm flattered. It's always nice to hear that my writing is good. :D