The Devil’s In the Details

[karmasoup]

Sucker Punch                                                  (Hear the Character-spoken VOICE Post HERE)

It’s not like I’as actually usin’ it.  At least, not that I’d noticed, ya feel me?  I mean, what do ya ever really do with a soul, anyway

Comments

[bleodswean]

Well done. This is really satisfying and you've done justice to the "deal with the devil" genre!!

[karmasoup]

Thanks! It wasn't the second time The Devil Went Down To Georgia, but it was close enough. Glad you enjoyed it.

[lapis_lazuli615]

Oh my gosh - I was rolling all the way through this! Brava! :)

[karmasoup]

Ha! Glad you found the humor in it... I was hoping it would be fun! Thanks!

[adoptedwriter]

I love the southern speak " voice" in this! AW

[karmasoup]

Thanks! I pretty grew up with that voice. My folks are actually (act-shly!) from Memphis, Tennessee, but a great deal of our family is in Alabama and Mississippi, as well. I grew up in Florida, myself, where it's not quite as bad, but having the family I do, "ain't no way I were gonna escape it!"

[tatdatcm]

I love the way you used the topic. I also admire the consistency of his voice and dialect throughout the piece. That had to be hard to maintain.

[karmasoup]

Thanks! I wasn't as hard as you might think... I know that voice better than I'd care to admit. Did you get the chance to check out the voice post link? You can HEAR it HERE.

[tsuki_no_bara]

this was really fun. i love the voice - kind of matter-of-fact and nicely self-aware, and with a dry sense of humor. i really like the voice post, too. it sounds just like someone being interviewed.

[karmasoup]

Thanks! I was hoping it sounded more like someone telling a story than being interviewed, but I suppose it could sound like one of those reality TV after the fact crime and punishment story documentary kinda interviews. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;)