Comments | karma_aster: So, it's likely total drek, but here's fic:

karma_aster

So, it's likely total drek, but here's fic:

Dec 12, 2007 13:03

Goodnight Moon
Author: Ryuu
Rating: PG (for REALLY mild swearing and even more mild innuendo)
Keywords: AU, fluff, angst, Sam/Jack, Jacob, Sam having Father Angst
Notes: So, this is a fic written in the jack_built AU universe and I have no idea if it's any good and it's angsty and cliched, so it's probably not, but here it is anyway.

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( Living in a building where stuff could easily blow up on a daily basis meant that Jack was generally used to raised voices... )

geekery, au, stargate, fanfic

Comments 22

lothithil December 12 2007, 19:05:26 UTC

*big shameless FanGurl grin!*

Very sweet! This story is a wonderful addition to the brain-eating AU that Jack Built!

*applause*

MmmMmm... waffles...

karma_aster December 13 2007, 00:17:35 UTC

Um, thanks?

emosweet December 12 2007, 19:31:21 UTC

about damn time!
thank you muchly, i waited too long for the pr0n to take place, and this was indeed sweet and fluffy and just right.
*happy sigh*

karma_aster December 12 2007, 19:56:31 UTC

Er...I kind of didn't see pr0n taking place right then, actually. I mean, it's a total setup to future fun and mutual nekkidness, but I kind of see it as Sam being vulnerable and hurt and Jack's trying to comfort her and keep her safe, but he really doesn't want to take advantage of her right then because he's very much a Good Guy and he also doesn't want that first time to be about neediness and just trying to forget grief.

Of course, I'm also really pretty rubbish when it comes to any romantic relationships, so I could be completely wrong about the whole thing.

emosweet December 12 2007, 22:09:02 UTC

'tis exactly what i meant, it's a step on the way to porn, hence called pr0n not 'porn'
;)
all the previous s/j ones were flirty fluff, now we're going somewhere.
i know i tend to deliver my words wrong, something gets lost between my brains and my mouth, or as mines boss told me recently 'you know, you might want to try that technique about thinking before speaking'
unnecessary story, but sums up the way things work in here ;)

karma_aster December 13 2007, 00:31:04 UTC

Well, I could see this being something that deepens things between the two of them. Y'know...Jack cluing in that he's not just physically attracted to the oddly hot geeky chick in his building but that he actually is genuinely starting to care about her and gets upset when she's hurt or sad.

Plus, he gets to cuddle with the hot blonde. He's definately not complaining about this concept.

driftingatdusk December 12 2007, 19:34:36 UTC

Ooo yay! Fantastic addition to the Jack_Built AU and completely adorable and angsty in equal measures! Jacob, eeeee!! *sniffles and clings to him tightly* And Sam/Jack snuggling and comfort to counteract the angst perfectly. *sigh* More....?

karma_aster December 13 2007, 00:14:49 UTC

...I have no idea what else to write?

driftingatdusk December 13 2007, 18:54:40 UTC

*ponders*
*cannot get brain further than more Sam and Jack snuggling*

Oooh, what about Jack and Jacob meeting...? I've always been curious as to whether Jacob would like Jack as much if they didn't have the Air Force in common.

*brain goes back to Sam/Jack snuggling and stalls*

mylittleredgirl December 12 2007, 19:40:29 UTC

*SQUEEEEEEE!*

This is so cute! OMG! You MUST cross-post if you have not done so already.

<3 <3 <3

karma_aster December 13 2007, 05:57:08 UTC

Er, if you mean cross-post to the comm, I have.

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karma_aster December 13 2007, 06:01:56 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.