Fic: Clocks (Doctor Who)

[karlamartinova]

Title: Clocks
Author: karlamartinova 
Pairing: Eleven/Rose, Amy/Rory
Genre: Angst, Romance
Rating: PG
Beta: bas_math_girl  THANK YOU!
Warning: Off-screen character death.
AN: I have seen a prompt "clocks" at Porn Battle and started writing it then, I didn't finished it till then and it never turn out porny.
Summary: “There really aren’t enough chances to say goodbye.”

...

Comments

[heintz57]

Very nice and heartwarming but sad at the same time. Well done

[karlamartinova]

Thank you:)

[bas_math_girl]

I've just noticed a few bits I missed when going through this! Sorry, love! And sorry for being late getting here to comment. *hugs*

[karlamartinova]

Is okay, it can happen :) And no worries, you helped enough already :)

*hugs back*

[srcstcrocker]

This is very nice. Not to over-the-top/dramatic, but more subdued - I like that. I just want to know what happens next! haha. The Doctor has a lot to explain to Amy and Rory ;)

For a while, he loved that he didn’t need to breathe as often as the human do and when the need for air was overwhelming and they parted, in the weakest of moments, the Doctor whispered.

I think you mean "as the humans do"? NBD, hardly noticeable; just caught my eye :)

[karlamartinova]

He does but he never was one to explain things :)

Yep, probably, I never notice these things, thank you fro catching it and your lovely comment:)

[srcstcrocker]

Amy: So, who's blondie?
Doctor: A friend...

They wouldn't find out her name til the second week, haha

And no problem! :)

[karlamartinova]

LOL.

And exactly! Let them guess.

Amy: You aren't River, are you?