"The line of memory"

Sep 12, 2012 22:22

She takes one deep breath, then another, ignores the men breathing heavily behind her. Alice needs to concentrate, needs to feel it, the adrenalin flowing through her veins, her heart beating a little too faster, the smell of fear and sweat. She enjoys it, the danger, the inevitable. Someone might die today and Alice only wishes it could be her.

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original story, series: wonderland, rating: r, tag: writerverse

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motoko1969 September 12 2012, 12:55:01 UTC
This is beautifully written... can I just point this out.
Great job and keep writing.

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karlamartinova September 12 2012, 13:03:02 UTC
Aah, thank you. I had to literally drag out one sentence a day but it seems it kicked me to more writing. THANK YOU again, and I will, I always will :)

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