Fic: The Right Time to Stop

[karlamartinova]

Title: The Right Time to Stop
Fandom: Borgias (Showtime)
Author: karlamartinova  
Pairing: Cesare/Lucrezia
Genre: Angst, AU
Rating: NC 17
Warning: Incest, sex and mentions of domestic violence!
Wordcount: 1 929 words!
Disclaimer: Showtime owns this show, the rest is owned by history, I just wrote this fic!
AN: Modern day AU, Rodrigo is a television priest and even though

Comments

[caffconcious]

Beautifully written! I was just a bit disappointed with the ending... Their intimate scene was so sexy and full of potential and ended a little abruptly, it'd have been nice to read more details. But well done!

[karlamartinova]

Thank you!

And I was a bit afraid to write more details, I am not very good with sex scenes and I tend to make them too cheesy but we need to try to learn, right?

[caffconcious]

I totally know the feeling. I've been wanting to write a piece of fic containing a sex scene and I never have enough disposition to do it. Never wrote anything like it and it seems so arduous, lol.
But you should try eventually, it looks like you'll do a nice job!

[karlamartinova]

Hopefully sometimes I will able to do it and write it the way I would also like it!

[honeymink]

I'm usually not big on AU scenarios but this was beautifully written. Thank you so much for sharing!

[karlamartinova]

You are welcome!

I thank you fro your lovely comment:)

[karlamartinova]

Thank you :) I wanted to be the same, they are perfect the way they are!