Comments | karjens40: Fic: The Choice Is Made- Olivia/Natalia Guiding Light

karjens40

Fic: The Choice Is Made- Olivia/Natalia Guiding Light

Aug 21, 2009 14:26

Title: The Choice is Made.

Author: Karjens40

Fandom: Guiding Light

Pairing: Olivia/Natalia

Spoilers: After Aug 17th and speculation on what comes next.
Summary: Olivia answers an invitation and gets a surprise.

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of these people. Just writing for entertainment.

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( Olivia arrives )

otalia, guiding light

Comments 13

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karjens40 August 22 2009, 02:15:07 UTC

Aww thank you. This was a total spur of the moment story after the ep the other day hah.

I'm so glad you liked it.

ceridwyn2 August 22 2009, 04:18:13 UTC

Very sweet. Loved it. :)

Yay Natalia backbone! wOOt!

karjens40 August 22 2009, 13:24:00 UTC

Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. I definitely think that Natalia is going to have to stand up to Rafe not just for Olivia but for herself too.

Thank you so much for reading and your lovely comments.

calliopes_muse August 22 2009, 04:43:35 UTC

Oh yeah! I want to see Natalia stand up to Rafe like that. He needs to be told he's not going to dictate her life.

And you did leave this at a mighty juicy point for a little continuation, didn't you?

karjens40 August 22 2009, 13:25:46 UTC

LOL. I did. But my muse panicked and ran off before the good part. I had no idea where to go after that heh. Maybe I'll tweak later when I grow a pair lol.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

lazydevil40 August 22 2009, 08:30:57 UTC

KJ yet again you manage to capture the scene wonderfully. I love the way you set it up for Olivia to be there to hear Natalia tell him off and the way she's finally melted... and the kiss... well, I think you need to write a sequel LOL

Wonderful as always =D

karjens40 August 22 2009, 13:27:51 UTC

Hi there. I've not talked to you in a while.My bad I know.

Thank you again for your awesome feed back. You have actually spurred a sequal I think. or a mini-sequel because while Liv will thaw she's still going to be skittish I think.

You're awesome. Thank you.

lazydevil40 August 22 2009, 13:32:47 UTC

LOL, hunni if ignoring me for a few days means I (we) get awesome fics to read, then keep on ignoring...LOL

:now, shoo, go write me more lovely stuff... I gotta go to work t'morrow and ain't lookin' forward to it so I want my fill of awesome before hand... g'on now, go write... *smirk*:

karjens40 August 22 2009, 23:53:20 UTC

You are are a lovely lazydevil. Yes ma'am. heh

ndasky1 August 22 2009, 23:47:59 UTC

Yes!! Nat kissed Liv! Woo hoo! And kudos to her for not giving in to Rafe's idiotic logic.

Loved it. :o)

karjens40 August 22 2009, 23:51:59 UTC

She's going to have to do this with him and I want to see it on screen. She came very close the other day. It will be hard for her, but she's getting there.

Thank you sweetie.