Comments | karjens40: Dawn-Olivia/Natalia

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Dawn-Olivia/Natalia

Aug 09, 2009 23:32

Title: Dawn

Author: Karjens40

Fandom: Guiding Light

Pairing: Olivia/Natalia

Rating: G

Summary: Natalia takes an early morning walk.

Spoilers: Nothing really specific.

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otalia, guiding light

Comments 14

lazydevil40 August 10 2009, 07:58:46 UTC

You already know that I love this but I'll say it publicly too. What a fantastic slice of family life at the FoL. Loved the imagery you detailed and the fact that Emma just grabs them at the end is just awesome.

Love it =D

karjens40 August 10 2009, 13:41:02 UTC

Thank you a million times. Glad you're not ashamed to admit liking it publicly lol..Emma's grabbing them was my little protest re: the baby. They don't need a baby. They have Em LOL.

I hope I corrected what you suggested. Yesterday was a mess lol...

Thank you so much.

lazydevil40 August 10 2009, 15:50:56 UTC

Yeah, you got the bits that I pointed out. I got the protest, but I'm kinda careful about my thoughts online about the s/l cuz it could upset others...

you're awesome (well, your writing anyway; my missus is in the room) ROFL

karjens40 August 10 2009, 16:14:06 UTC

LOL. I undertsand about the limited compliment. heh heh. I'll take whatt I can get.

ceridwyn2 August 10 2009, 16:54:24 UTC

Very lovely. Quiet enjoyed. Ah, the Otalia family sweetness. :)

karjens40 August 10 2009, 17:11:39 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. :-) I miss the family happy.heh and you caught me just as I was about to post to P & P ha

magicmumu August 10 2009, 18:45:00 UTC

I thought this was nice. I am glad that you write them out as a family and had them together in a peaceful setting. Great little fic.

Erin

karjens40 August 10 2009, 19:19:55 UTC

Thank you. I'm very glad you liked it. Though most of my stuff tends toward the angsty I love having a happy fluffy idea come to me.

Thank you again.

meatisadelicacy August 10 2009, 20:44:58 UTC

aww, so sweet. thank you for that!

karjens40 August 10 2009, 20:54:22 UTC

Thank you so much. I was in the mood for fluffy lol. Thanks for reading and the kind words.

columbus150 August 10 2009, 21:25:16 UTC

Just lovely. Otalia family fics are my favorite and this certainly qualifies. Loved that Emma didn't blink an eye at her mommies' closeness.

karjens40 August 10 2009, 22:09:02 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.I miss the family times dreadfully and I really think that Emma won't care a hoot as long as they're together heh.

I'm very happy you liked it. :-)