Fic: The Next Day

Apr 18, 2009 16:50

Title: The Next Day
Author: karenor
Character/Pairing: Ten II/Rose
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Words didn't seem large enough to express what they were feeling.
Disclaimer: BBC owns, etc. etc.
Note: This was intended to be a longer multiparter. But I decided I liked it where it stops. I do have more written. But it might be relegated to a crumpled sheet at ( Read more... )

tenth doctor, pete's world

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missperkigoth April 19 2009, 00:08:31 UTC
Yay, you got it posted! I really love the snuggles here. *grin*

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karenor April 19 2009, 01:33:35 UTC
Thank you. And again for the shotgun betaing. ;)

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helygen April 19 2009, 00:19:59 UTC
Oh hun this is absolutely gorgeous :)

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karenor April 19 2009, 01:35:12 UTC
Thank you. :D

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karenor April 19 2009, 01:40:22 UTC
I go back and forth on how Rose is going to think right after JE. Here she is a bit more preoccupied with him. In the possible second part, we'd see more of a focus on her. And that talking they'd need to do. Maybe. ;).

One beta wanted this longer, the other wanted it just as it is. I wanted to post it, so... here it is.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the lovely comment. :)

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aroniwen April 19 2009, 00:56:12 UTC
This is gorgeous, and I really like where you ended it, ambiguous but hopeful... you just know that they'll be alright.

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karenor April 19 2009, 02:36:18 UTC
They'll definitely be all right, even if it takes them a while. *squishes them tight*

Thank you very much!

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hazelwho April 19 2009, 00:56:57 UTC
This was lovely. This seemed so perfectly *them*, even if I never imagined I'd hear the word "snuggly" come out of the Doctor's mouth. :) I love how tentative they are with each other. Uncertain, not of each other, but of what they have and where they'll go from here. I like this story as it is, and I understand why you left it here. But if you ever feel like rescuing the rest of it from your purse, I'd love to read how you imagine their relationship unfolding.

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karenor April 19 2009, 02:42:05 UTC
Thank you!

I never imagined I'd hear the word "snuggly" come out of the Doctor's mouth.

Hee. :D I don't think he ever imagined it either, which is why I like it.

There may yet be a rescue of the rest of this. I didn't want it to become... I dunno, too bogged down in the emo, I suppose.

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