Comments | karaokegal: "Guilt Trip" Torchwood/Dr. Who Jack/Martha NC17 Wordcount-2815

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"Guilt Trip" Torchwood/Dr. Who Jack/Martha NC17 Wordcount-2815

Jun 14, 2009 09:10

Title: Guilt Trip
Fandom: Torchwood/Dr. Who
Pairing: Jack/Martha
Rating: NC17
Wordcount: 2815
Notes: Written for the Torchwood/Dr. Who Porn Battle. Thanks so much to rose_cat for awesome beta with immensely quick turn-around, especially for correcting my quotes and keeping my POV tight. Themes for the Porn Battle are: edging, threesomes and drunken!sex. I ( Read more... )

martha jones, torchwood, nc17, fanfic, bastard!jack, jack harkness

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ebineez01 June 15 2009, 04:55:54 UTC

very nice. I always like Jack and Martha together. Nice imagery that the Doctor will always be there with them

karaokegal June 15 2009, 07:50:59 UTC

Jack and Martha would be totally hot together, but there's pretty much no way to get away from their individual and mutual Doctor issues.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

filthgoblin June 15 2009, 07:42:51 UTC

Oh, very hot. I like it very much. Martha's acknowledgement of Jack's out-and-out bastardness and her acceptance of him for what he is and how he behaves and yet still wanting him anyway is just perfect.

karaokegal June 15 2009, 07:48:33 UTC

Thanks sweetie! I have a feeling this may be a little too much Bastard!Jack for the Porn Battle, but honestly, any Jack/Martha hook-up post LoTL, has to account for both Tom and Jack's other entanglements.

I loved having them together and understanding what it was they were both getting.

I appreciate the comment. :)

filthgoblin June 15 2009, 10:06:40 UTC

I don't see why it would be too much. It's hot. It's truthful. It doesn't bash Janto. There's no flaming, no nastiness. It points out if anything that he's evil to the poor, long-suffering wanking alternative but it's JACK! Job done :D

51stcenturyfox June 15 2009, 08:14:05 UTC

Maybe never. Or maybe she’d lost normal forever when she first set foot in the TARDIS. Not that she’d give up a minute of it, not even a second of the year that never was.

Aww. Hot and bittersweet.

Jack and Martha have that year, and those memories, and a relationship with the doctor. Sort of a "we'll always have Paris" thing, but that was so HARD and this is so nice. They deserved to have this. :)

karaokegal June 15 2009, 17:00:10 UTC

Thanks sweetie! And thanks again for hosting the battle itself.

I honestly wanted to write PWP, but you know how that goes.

Jack and Martha absolutely have that connection and they definitely deserve this, but Martha has that "good girl" streak, so she has to get past her guilt (and Jack's lack thereof) for this to happen.

la_esmeralda_ June 15 2009, 10:14:41 UTC

Ooh, very hot, and at the same time, more deliciously screwed up than I'd have thought these two could be together at this point...

karaokegal June 15 2009, 16:58:32 UTC

Thanks sweetie! I think the Doctor has screwed them both up royally and they're only kidding themselves if they think otherwise, especially Martha.

elinor_godwin June 15 2009, 17:14:30 UTC

Oh, yeah! That was gloriously in character, well written and hot. These two will always have their Doctor issues and no one else is really going to completely understand. Thanks for the great story with my favorite pairing - J/ABI :) You rock!

karaokegal June 16 2009, 03:01:32 UTC

*snuggles*

It's going to be a rough few months and we real!Jack lovers have to stick together.

Glad you liked. :)