MMOM Day 10 "The Dreams I've Dreamed Lately" Firefly Mal/Zoe 100 words PG

[karaokegal]

Title: The Dreams I've Dreamed Lately
Fandom: Firefly
Pairing: Mal/Zoe (mention of Inara)
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 100
Notes: My first ever attempt at this Fandom. Prompt suggested by sarahetc.

Concrit and comments welcome. Thanks to hllangel for beta.

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Comments

[were_lemur]

I tried to figure out the best line, but it's all great. And very much in character.

[karaokegal]

Thank you so much. (WHEW!)

[hansolo5]

I didn't know anything about Firefly until last year, when a friend recommended it to me, and gave me the dvds.
It's not amongst my fav shows, but I definetely love Mal.
(My friend had a crush for Jayne...!)
And what you wrote here is simply him.
Great!

[karaokegal]

Thanks sweetheart! Glad it worked for you. The voices on that show are really hard to get right.

[mad_jaks]

I don't read much Firefly but I love the show and this seems like Mal all right *G*

[karaokegal]

YAY!

Thanks for reading it. Glad to hear I got it right.

[sarahetc]

Oh Mal! My heart clenches for him.

[karaokegal]

Thanks for the prompt. And your patience until I got into the show. :)

[sarahetc]

You're so welcome. Looking forward to more in this fandom!

[laurab1]

Oh, I like that!

Great use of language, too :)

[karaokegal]

WHEW!

Thanks! My first time trying to write the fandom, so I'm glad it worked. The language is very different from anything else I write.