Title: Delicate Fiend
Fandom: Castle
Characters/Pairing: Richard Castle (Castle/Shakespeare)
Rating: PG13
Wordcount: 1275
Notes: Written for
MMOM 2012, Day 3. Prompt from
book_junkie007: Castle, Castle, Shakespeare. Unbeta'd comments and concrit welcome
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I found a few spelling errors, but the overall quality of the writing was really good. I could hear Castle's voice here, and this is something Castle would do, imagining famous writers and playwrights talking to him, I think.
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Thanks for the prompt. It was a challenge, but I'm happy with my solution to it.
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Voyeur!ghost!Shakespeare was entirely believable, especially since my literary background includes no actual Shakespeare (at least, not untranslated) but frequent and careful perusal of "The portrait of Mr. W.H."
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This was Shakespeare after all. Ghosts were to be expected.
Truer words have never been spoken.
This was hilarious good fun! Thoroughly enjoyed! <333
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(You have a couple of places with a comma followed by a capital letter, which presumably should be full stops instead:
'the galleys for Heat Rises, Eventually he gives up'
'told him he’d understand someday, He wasn’t sure whether she envisioned him as an old letch'
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