MMOM Day 3-"Delicate Fiend" Castle Richard Castle/William Shakespeare Rating R

May 03, 2012 21:02

Title: Delicate Fiend
Fandom: Castle
Characters/Pairing: Richard Castle (Castle/Shakespeare)
Rating: PG13
Wordcount: 1275
Notes: Written for MMOM 2012, Day 3. Prompt from book_junkie007: Castle, Castle, Shakespeare. Unbeta'd comments and concrit welcome ( Read more... )

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book_junkie007 May 4 2012, 05:47:26 UTC
This is awesome, and thank you for using my prompt. :)

I found a few spelling errors, but the overall quality of the writing was really good. I could hear Castle's voice here, and this is something Castle would do, imagining famous writers and playwrights talking to him, I think.

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karaokegal May 4 2012, 05:57:06 UTC
Please let me know about the typos. I think I've caught all the html issues.

Thanks for the prompt. It was a challenge, but I'm happy with my solution to it.

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book_junkie007 May 4 2012, 06:47:26 UTC
Okay, will do. Would you like me to copy and paste the story to a document then beta it and email it back? It can't be done tonight though: I'm too tired. I'll do it tomorrow for sure though.

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karaokegal May 4 2012, 06:55:27 UTC
Whenever you get a chance. I caught a few more. I shouldn't post when I have tired eyes myself.

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damigella_314 May 4 2012, 09:18:38 UTC
This was absolutely awesome, even though (as by now you probably expect) I have no clue about who Castle is. Or, to be precise, I didn't before I read this - now it's no longer true.
Voyeur!ghost!Shakespeare was entirely believable, especially since my literary background includes no actual Shakespeare (at least, not untranslated) but frequent and careful perusal of "The portrait of Mr. W.H."

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karaokegal May 4 2012, 17:54:13 UTC
Thanks for taking a gander. Castle is fairly light stuff, but well-done. Basically, I looked at the prompt and my crack-muse came up with this. Glad you liked.

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tjs_whatnot May 5 2012, 21:30:44 UTC
lsjdfal;sjfa;

This was Shakespeare after all. Ghosts were to be expected.

Truer words have never been spoken.

This was hilarious good fun! Thoroughly enjoyed! <333

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karaokegal May 5 2012, 21:37:24 UTC
Thanks sweetie! It was fun to write. I really wanted to try and keep the light touch of the series, but I think some angsty bits might have slipped in as well.

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aeron_lanart May 7 2012, 21:46:59 UTC
Hee! Castle would have Shakespeare as a voyeuristic wanking partner, even in his own head. I love it.

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karaokegal May 10 2012, 20:01:06 UTC
Thank you! I'm still feeling my way toward writing this fandom. Not sure if I've quite got the voices down, so I thought this was a good way to start.

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unfeathered June 13 2012, 19:41:34 UTC
Heh, this definitely suits Castle's ego! Lots of fun. :-)

(You have a couple of places with a comma followed by a capital letter, which presumably should be full stops instead:

'the galleys for Heat Rises, Eventually he gives up'

'told him he’d understand someday, He wasn’t sure whether she envisioned him as an old letch'

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karaokegal June 18 2012, 04:31:45 UTC
Thanks for the typo catches! Glad you liked the fic. Castle is a fun character to work with. I really like the tone of the show. Much lighter than almost any other fandom I'm currently writing.

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