Comments | karaokegal: "Quizmaster" NCIS drabble Abby, Carol, Gibbs, Fornell

karaokegal

"Quizmaster" NCIS drabble Abby, Carol, Gibbs, Fornell

Nov 12, 2011 22:05

Title: Quizmaster
Fandom: NCIS
Characters: Abby, Carol, Gibbs, Fornell
Rating: G
Wordcount: 100
Warnings: Spoilers for Devil's Triangle
Notes: Drabble-a-Day 2011. Day 316. Prompt from ncisdrabble100. Challenge #264-Which. Beta'd by proseac1. Comments and concrit welcome.
Summary: Girl-talk in the lab.

( There are some things you can't cover up with lipstick and powder. )

ncis, fanfic, drabble, gibbs/fornell, jethro gibbs, drabble-a-day 2011, tobias fornell, ncisdrabble100

Comments 10

nakeisha November 13 2011, 13:11:05 UTC

I like this.

karaokegal November 16 2011, 20:34:23 UTC

Thank you!

proseac1 November 13 2011, 13:30:57 UTC

I'd love to see more of Carol on the show. And I don't blame her for hitting on Fornell...Abby needs to take a chill pill! Hee!

Wonder what happened that New Year's Eve...?

I can hear Abby's voice here; you've captured it well. Sweet!

karaokegal November 16 2011, 20:36:26 UTC

I guess the New Year's Eve story will have to be written at some point. I don't write a lot of Abby, but I always try to get her voice as accurately as I can, which is tricky.

flamingo55 November 14 2011, 03:34:21 UTC

This is great! And a better question would be, Abby, why not hit on Fornell? He's adorable. :)

karaokegal November 16 2011, 20:36:55 UTC

Loves me some Fornell. Thanks for reading and commenting.

alidiabin November 16 2011, 01:04:30 UTC

Very nice. I liked it very much. Well done.

karaokegal November 16 2011, 20:37:14 UTC

Thank you so much!

kytivafan November 17 2011, 22:20:24 UTC

That was an awesome scene and captured it so well.

I love when you write NCIS

(well, I love all your stuff - but especially like NCIS because I know that show so well)

I would hit on Fornell - totally.

karaokegal November 21 2011, 20:56:15 UTC

I just loved the way Joe Spano played that scene, but even my Gibbs/Fornell loving self would have some big Squeeee if there was even a shout out to a Carol/Fornell follow up.

Thanks for reading and commenting.