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kara_winchester

Final Prompt!!!!

Sep 25, 2007 19:02

Yay, I'm so excited! This is my third and final prompt for the 50 prompts challenge, and it's the prompt "shouting". It's a John spanks Dean fic, which is always fun to write :) Even though I don't have any more prompts, I've gotten some ideas from all 50 words, so we'll see what I come up with ( Read more... )

supernatural, john spanks dean, shouting

Comments 18

astrangerfate September 25 2007, 23:35:29 UTC

Have I told you within the last 30 minutes how much I love this fic? Positively delicious and a little terrifying. ::hugs:: You rule!

kara_winchester September 26 2007, 02:46:19 UTC

Lol no but you have been telling me since last week when I first wrote the line, "Boy, you raise your voice to me one more time and I swear I will bend you over this bed and tan your hide with my belt". I'm glad you liked it so much. ::hugs::

astrangerfate September 26 2007, 02:48:53 UTC

What can I say? It's a frigging awesome line. I want to take it and keep it forever. :)

minx999 September 25 2007, 23:57:06 UTC

Great fic! Boy, Dean must have been possessed to have gotten up in his dad's face like that, shouting at him. Yikes. Not a tactic I'd ever want to try with John. But then, those adolescent years are pure hell on the psyche, aren't they? And you described that so well with Dean's inner monologue while he was doing corner time. Awesome ( ... )

kara_winchester September 26 2007, 02:52:11 UTC

Yeah, I think he was possessed by hormones lol. I almost didn't put that corner time monologue in there, but I'm really glad I did :)

I took the "It didn't hurt" bit from the Halloween fic that Cam and I wrote...I loved it so much I had to reuse it. And I never planned on including the belt at all...it all started with the line about John bending him over the bed and tanning his hide that I wrote before I even started the fic, and it sort of evolved from there.

And Cam insists that I spoil Sammy, but I love cuddles immensely, and Sammy is so much better at cuddling than Dean is :)

Apparently you and I enjoy the same aspects of fics, although I don't mind a snarky and spanked Sammy either :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

nocturnal08 September 26 2007, 00:00:03 UTC

Oh Dean! It's not a side we see much for him and it makes me wonder what he's been going through to just explode like that. I really felt for him, trying to hold onto his anger and keep from crying around his dad. But John wasn't having any of that!

Sammy was precious in this and I like that he understand how things work around there.

Fabulous job!!

kara_winchester September 26 2007, 02:56:07 UTC

Yeah, I hope I made Dean seem realistic...I was kind of going off his line in Wendigo, "I'm supposed to be the belligerent one." He's not going through anything specific, just typical adolescent angst and frustration. I played out the tension as long as I could, but in the end, I had to let him break before John actually used the belt on him :)

I'm glad you liked precious Sammy! I wanted to pick him up and snuggle him the whole time I was writing this!

I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!

atalantaj September 26 2007, 03:43:26 UTC

Good job! I was pleasantly surprised with Dean's rebelliousness, and that he wouldn't give into his father's spanking at first. It's not something you see in too many Dean getting spanked fics, but it was really in character. I can see Dean acting all tough through a spanking, but of course his father would be able to get through to him and I'm glad he did, because I wanted Dean to get the belt about as much as he did. My main problem with spanking fics, is as much as Sam and Dean may deserve their spankings, I always feel so damn bad for them, but of course I still like it at the same time. Anyway, really, nice fic here. I really felt Dean's pain and his anticipation for his dad to come in and spank him again, while he was in the corner was lovely. It was my favorite part of the story actually. So, happy you posted.

kara_winchester September 26 2007, 03:51:46 UTC

Oh, I am so glad you thought it was in character! I kept worrying that Dean was being too rebellious, but I wanted so much for them to have a battle of wills. And I didn't want Dean to get the belt either...like I said, it evolved from one line and got away from me :) And I always feel bad for the boys too...but I don't think I spoil them ::cough cough cam cough cough:: I'm glad you liked Dean in the corner so much...that was another part that I wasn't going to write, but once I wrote it I fell in love with it :) I'm glad you enjoyed that story!

astrangerfate September 26 2007, 12:09:33 UTC

Well, you don't spoil Dean at all. Sam's just got you wrapped around his oh-so-adorable little finger. :D

thevulgarvirgin September 26 2007, 03:57:59 UTC

I'm so jealous, done with all your prompts, serious kudos to you hun!

That being said, I really loved this fic, it's not often we get to see a defiant Dean and I think you captured his angst very well. John's threat of using his belt had me squirming! I love Dean's "That didn't hurt" OMG, he's insane saying that over John's lap, his thoughts in the corner were what really brought it together for me, the fact that he doesn't want to give into his dad and he's not even really sure why! Poor Dean, and then when he finally does just let go, my poor baby! Awesome fic lovey!

kara_winchester September 26 2007, 16:00:34 UTC

Actually, I'm kind of sad...a lot of the prompts I wanted were taken before I had the chance to get to them, and I wanted to do more. A lot of the words inspired me, though, and I'm going to create lots more fics out of them :)

I was squirming myself every time the subject of the belt came up lol. And yes, I think Dean could be declared temporarily insane due to adolescent angst, but he got smart in the end :) I'm glad you liked it!