#5minutefiction & #fridayflash "Empathy Training"

Jun 10, 2011 12:58

I think I'm doomed to never complete #5minutefiction in the allotted time (I almost always _start_ after the buffer on entry is past), but ... hey. A cute one this week, imo ~

Empathy Training

He’d lie awake, chilled from the cold sweats that troubled his infrequent dozing. He’d curse, in a dozen languages, the turns that had brought him to this ( Read more... )

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anonymous June 10 2011, 21:23:34 UTC
I thought he was the criminal at first. I have to wonder what kind of society trains it jurors to empathize like that.

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kaolinfire June 10 2011, 21:29:32 UTC
A righteous one ;)

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nalene June 12 2011, 00:47:55 UTC
I thought he was the criminal at first too.

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kaolinfire June 12 2011, 03:52:29 UTC
Very careful word choices, that :)

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