One World with Seven Sins ...8/8END

[kanu_x]

Edited: 2013.02.10

Title: One World with Seven Sins
Feature/Pairing: only Yama, OCs
Rating: PG-13 (incest, sexual references)
Genre: au, solely romance based: no subplots
Summary: Stepbrothers Ohno and Sho gradually fall in love over the years.
Their troubles learning to accept and understand their feelings. Aka frustration.
Part: 8/8
A/N: This

Comments

[xxx_francesca]

First?

Reserved for commenting yo!

Yay first!!!! Btw this is part 1 of my praises to you :)

[xxx_francesca]

i cant believe its over TT^TT i enjoyed this story so much! I seriously loved the side convos happening! They made me giddy & crack up laughing my head off or snicker hahaha i cant wait for your next project if you plan another one in the future! I hope you wont mind me re-quoting certain & my fave lines from most of the chapter cos i seriously think they are classic! Epic!

Ohno: "Oh... but you were cute too.
Sho: "..."
Ohno: "You were so small. So much more than me."
Sho: "Hey, but look at me now."
Ohno: "Don't show off."
--- this was hilarious!! i loved how ohno teased him bout being shorter but he got shamed by Sho after lollll so cute!

Part 2 of my praises~

[xxx_francesca]

But Sho held on. "Satoshi, should we get married

[kanu_x]

V(^-^) i love long comments! it shows what you've been thinking
*dancing in the rain of love&praises oh my, you guys are seriously causing my head to swell, i need a doctor
ur fave parts are some of mines to (but maybe as the writer i love&hate everything)
its great that you referred back to it
*more unrecognizable blubbering and words of gratitude insert here*
thanks for reading and liking it! without you guys i couldn't have finished<3LUVLUV

[borylovearashi]

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa that was soooooooooooooo cute i love when Oh-chan get Mad at Sho-kun kyaaaaaaaa love them that was beautiful end ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Sho-kun so sweet i love the way he treat Oh-chan thank you so much i love I Really didn't want it to end i want to keep reeding it i hope you have another Yama fic in your mind or Juntoshi i don't mind them lol anyway thank you again your the best really good jop kiss and Hug from Sho and Oh-chan to you ..^_^..

[kanu_x]

*screaming and jumping with you until we realize we're creating a scene*oops
towards the end i lost inspiration for this yama fic but now
that im finished the weird thing is im feeling it again :/
since my ichiban is ohno i just can't help luvin ohno w/ his pairs
you're in luck! ive done ohmiya, yama, now my next is juntoshi+
but how fast that fic goes up depends
thanks for reading and liking it!!!!gratitude from meee!!
*accepting your hugs&kisses*

[borylovearashi]

you don't need to thank me honey i should the one who keep thanking you but you welcome kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa really Juntoshi kyaaaaaaaaaaa i can't wait for it Juntoshi my favorites you know i am so happy coz you write one thank you so much and i will keep screaming and jumping with you until we realize we're creating a scene whenever you want oh by the way i have a lot of Juntoshi pic's in my journal go see it if you want to maybe it will gave idee's for your fic's thank you agin honey gambate ne ^_^

[kanu_x]

will take you up on your offer! d(>->)
ill need a lot of inspiration, juntoshi pics yea!

[narusaku4vr]

That was sweet and very fluffy. After all they've been through, they deserve this happiness.
The surprise Sho had for Satoshi in the end was so sweet.
You made me smile, thanks for this.

Hope to read more from you in the future.
Hope you can write a SakuMiya one too (my forever OTP).

[kanu_x]

THANKSS! hope to see more of u in the future too^^
actually, i just finished watching YamadaTaroM. recently
i REALLLIEE wanted to write a sakumiya becuz of it
maybe i stalled too long. wait and see:D
right,right! after all they went thro, yama deserved the fluff
thanks again!

[narusaku4vr]

You will? You will? I'll definitely wait for that. I just love those two a lot. And you have JunToshi next, I like them too and I'll be waiting for that one as well.

[amnos13]

omoshiroi :) i like the 'first meeting'. their otousan is really a good father ne :) and i like satoshi's grumble and how sho just chuckled about that. thanks for writing this :)

[kanu_x]

and thanks for reading all the way until the end!^-^
glad that its funny. i wanted it to be light after all the
depressing ones. it worked!!

[midorinohana]

It's sweet!~

Yama pair is not my OTP but somehow the way u wrote
this fic attracted me to follow it till the end.

Thanks for sharing and thanks for the hard work. ^____^

[kanu_x]

ooh thankyou! that's good to hear!
to know is inspiring for me 0v0
and thanks for reading until the end!!d(>>)