PoT Fic: "How Atobe Stole Seigaku's Virginity" Epilogue (PG-13) - Tezuka/Atobe

[kantayra]

Title: "How Atobe Stole Seigaku's Virginity" Epilogue

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[kallysten]

*draws ♥ around them*

[kantayra]

Gay boys = ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥. :D

[serenti]

I knew it. I just freaking knew it XDDD

[kantayra]

Atobe was a very nefarious virgin. :P Thanks for reading!

[stevie_chan]

Aw man it's over. *hands author medal* For most amazing laughs ever!

Atobe you sneak! Tut tut tut.

I don't see why Tezuka despairs over that shirt...Atobe's so rich he'll just replace it XD For a 'price' that is XD

It's always Fuji who is called when vengence or menace is needed...Fujiko should start charging people XD

[kantayra]

Atobe's a tricksy one. Luckily, Tezuka now knows how to deal with him properly. :P

I would pay Fuji for vengeance. It'd be a lucrative career for him.

Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

[swyrel]

This whole story has been <3

'Whoever it was, he was going to sick Fuji on them. He didn’t even care if that was evil.'

This sentence. I just love this sentence. In it, you have shown two things: that Tezuka is capable of human emotions (and so many fic writers don't seem to think he is) and that Fuji pwns all. XD

'Tezuka Kunimitsu is so dead, Tezuka thought. And then blinked.'

I love watching Tezuka's mind catch up to his jealousy. Hilarious~

This story just amused the hell out of me, and I thank you for that. But, I bet that Rikkai is a bunch of virgins too, so Atobe should send his virginity stealing services there too (but perhaps someone else should take care of Sanada, or Tezuka will send Fuji after him XD).

[neooldetokyo]

Oh gosh yes. Rikkai are definitely virgins. Apart from Niou. I bet Kirahara is dying to get his end away but his senpais won't let him ;-)

[swyrel]

O.O Yes, yes, I like where you are going with this. Niou is tired of being surrounded by virgins, so he enlists Atobe's help with getting rid of the virginity. I can see Akaya 'volunteering' to go first. XD

[kantayra]

Well, if Nioh isn't a virgin, then Yagyu certainly isn't, either. One just follows from the other, you know. :P

[fallen_chan]

Oh. my. God.

I'm just going to comment on chapter 6 and the epilogue here, seeing as I just read both~

The dinosaurs. And Tezuka and Atobe both defying the laws of physics, gravity, and common sense. Oishi's handcuffs. Kawamura burning all of Fuji's pants. And Tezuka showing that no, he is not a block of wood and yes, he is subject to the same feelings as us lowly mortals, jealousy being the prime example. Especially this part: [Tezuka Kunimitsu is so dead, Tezuka thought. And then blinked.] it's lovely.

This fic has effectively broken my brain, so absolutely no coherency coming from me. (XD;;) I don't suppose you could be persuaded to send Atobe's marvelously non-virgin team and the newly converted Seigaku team over to Rikkai Daigaku Fuzoku to ensure that Rikkai's not left out on the love? assuming, of course, that Niou hasn't somehow managed to complete said task already. I'm betting he's already made sure Yagyuu's not a virgin...

[kantayra]

assuming, of course, that Niou hasn't somehow managed to complete said task already. I'm betting he's already made sure Yagyuu's not a virgin...

Yagyu's virginity never stood a chance. :P And, as much as I would love to torment Rikkaidai this way, my brain just doesn't seem to know what to do with the idea. I guess I'll just have to find other ways to torture them in the meantime. Nioh can help. :P

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed!

[fallen_chan]

Of course. It's Niou we're talking about. Yagyuu's virginity was doomed the moment they met.

^^; my brain is filled to the brim with overactive rabid plotbunnies, but I can't characterize Hyoutei half as well as you can. I doubt I could pull of Rikkaidai either...

:P gratuitous torture of Rikkaidai next please?

♥ it was wonderful reading~
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