Comments | kansan_entrails: GUYS

kansan_entrails

GUYS

Nov 04, 2011 23:54

I have finally begun the FINAL REWRITE OF MY EPIC LONG COMIC PROJECT. Finally~

Also, I have come up with an epic title (that actually makes sense):

( Desert Grey, Part 1 )

lolself, determination, flaming cars, desert grey, keepin' it surreal

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gryphonsegg November 5 2011, 17:41:25 UTC

Yes, it seemed clear to me. This will make a great comic!

kansan_entrails November 5 2011, 19:22:16 UTC

-squirms all happy like- Hopefully I'll get the second part up tonight. Maybe the third part too. Maybe.

gryphonsegg November 5 2011, 20:04:47 UTC

<3 That would be very good.

denelian November 15 2011, 07:24:47 UTC

this awesome, and engages the reader emotionally very quickly. perfect!

kansan_entrails November 15 2011, 17:38:43 UTC

Thank you! I'm pretty proud of this begining. I've changed the story so much over the years, but now it feels right.

denelian November 15 2011, 17:55:37 UTC

it reads very well. TBH, i was worried by the reboot, because while i knew you were struggling with the original, it seemed to be going very well [and i loved it] and i'm very surprised by HOW MUCH i like the new one, i mean, i like it MORE than the old one. very surprised by that!!!

kansan_entrails November 15 2011, 18:08:09 UTC

I think once I figured out how the world worked and how to make the timeline easier for me to remember that things just fell into place.

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