if love is a drug i guess we're all sober

[kannachan27]

I open my mouth and my words die in my throat. You may say that they don't die, but I can feel them. Their decaying bodies pile up, leaving behind a bad taste. It makes me want to retch, but I don't. My mouth closes tightly again. The attempt to speak was a failure and I sit down silently.

I feel them dying and it makes me want to cry. This panic

Comments

[danybel]

I love how you describe the words as if they were people, each and every single one a different person, and I liked how you ended it.

[kannachan27]

♥
thank youuuuu~
I was going to continue, but then I rewrote the ending... and I liked it better. :] Glad I'm not the only one.

[danybel]

lol i think that you said what you wanted to say with the story, and making it longer will make it loose its meaning...........or something LOL

[kannachan27]

Something like that lol. It didn't come out exactly how I was planning, though... I guess it's cuz I wasn't feeling like that anymore, when I sat down to write this..

[stearicacid]

Ooooh, I like it. Super-spaced post is also super spaced xD

[kannachan27]

Thank you ♥
I didn't make it super-spaced!! It's just that... when I would try to make it not-super-spaced, it didn't get spaced at all. like, one big jumble of words ;; So I had to keep it like this lol.

[stearicacid]

That's really weird. Do you have everything set to default (god I don't remember what the posting thing looks like anymore, but it used to be you could set it to automatically space after paragraphs and stuff)? Did you hit enter 3-4 times when you meant twice? Loldunno.

[kannachan27]

I was in such a hurry when I posted this, all I did was copy and paste it from a word document... It's so weird that when I do that, things mess up. Either they're too spaced/not spaced enough or everything gets bold/italic, especially when I cut it.. And most of the time, parts of it are moved around. Like, something in the middle will be all the way at the end and it'll be jumbled and weird.