Gen whore that I am, I almost feel like the first segment could stand as a story on its own. The description of the beautiful, brutal, completely alien landscape of Amarendos and the parallels the point-of-view character draws between that planet and the tinkly deadliness of the Royal Court is a gorgeous bit of world-building.
On the other hand, her insight into Londo and G'Kar- particularly her realization that Londo is embracing his own death- is fantastic. There's no need for porn here- the story is quite good without it.
*makes note to write about the lack of need for porn when writing Londo/G'Kar*
Thankee! I am still struggling with the logistics of the porn, so most fic that'll originate from here will be porn-less, at least until I get the tentacles unknotted.
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Gen whore that I am, I almost feel like the first segment could stand as a story on its own. The description of the beautiful, brutal, completely alien landscape of Amarendos and the parallels the point-of-view character draws between that planet and the tinkly deadliness of the Royal Court is a gorgeous bit of world-building.
On the other hand, her insight into Londo and G'Kar- particularly her realization that Londo is embracing his own death- is fantastic. There's no need for porn here- the story is quite good without it.
*makes note to write about the lack of need for porn when writing Londo/G'Kar*
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Thankee! I am still struggling with the logistics of the porn, so most fic that'll originate from here will be porn-less, at least until I get the tentacles unknotted.
Am so glad you liked it!
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