VM FIC: Childish Things (1/1)

[kangeiko]

yeah, my first real attempt at getting into the head of any of the Neptune characters. So, um, probably not that successful. Not betaed either. Er. Concrit welcome.

TITLE: Childish Things
AUTHOR: kangeiko
SUMMARY: She's got, like, a yo-yo of trauma. Dick POV, set post-S2 finale.

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Comments

[berry_hearts]

i liked this. I thought it was very true to dick. And i liked that Dick and Veronica got along. I think it was a little weird, but very DICK to think that way about the rape. :D

[kangeiko]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

[abvj]

Wow, this was really, really good. Your Dick voice was spot on - a terrific mixture of angony over losing Cassidy and anger at Veronica and wishing it was Veronica dead instead of his brother... You just hit everything right on the nail.

I really liked how you made Veronica and Dick see past their own pain and see each other. Even though, yes, Veronica does have her own shit to deal with Dick has his own stuff to deal with and they are both permenantly interlaced because of Logan.

I just, yeah, loved this.

Thank you!

[kangeiko]

So glad you liked it. :)

Even though, yes, Veronica does have her own shit to deal with Dick has his own stuff to deal with and they are both permenantly interlaced because of Logan.

It's my secret fannish kink - Veronica and Dick actually sharing screen time and dealing. What're the odds that wemight actually get them some screen time in season 3??

[odintsova_27]

You captured Dick perfectly, nice job!

[kangeiko]

Thank you!

[hiddeneloise]

I have such mixed feelings about Dick, not in small measure due to his part in that night at Shelley's party

[kangeiko]

I have such mixed feelings about Dick, not in small measure due to his part in that night at Shelley's party.

Yeah, me too - I would have liked to see him actually dealing with the fall-out of that on the show, and am actually hoping that Veronica and Dick will share some screen time in S3.

It's a lot to convey in a short fic, and you did an amazing job.

Thank you so much for all the kind words - it's an amazing compliment to receive such lovely feedback!

[evie_oh]

I really liked this, I've never read a Dick centric fic before but this has actually made me want to go out and find more. I'll add my voice to the chorus and say that I also really loved the little details (like Beaver folding his pj's) and the characterisation of Logan -even though we only saw a glimpse of him. Really great job is it ok if I add this to my memories?

[kangeiko]

Thank you, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Really great job is it ok if I add this to my memories?

That's the ultimate compliment - go right ahead! *loves*