Chasing Freedom - Chapter 4

[kang2urteuk]

Title: Chasing Freedom, Chapter 4, Siwon/Eunhyuk
Length: 1,983 words
Author: shieldkitten
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Siwon discovers Zhoumi's little business venture. Will he let Hyukjae remain onboard the Sapphire Pearl? Or will he feed Hyukjae to the sharks in a moment of embitteredness?
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Comments

[aconite]

LAS;KJDKHF WHY ARE YOU SO FANTASTIC? WHAT IS YOUR SECRET???

Omg. Hyukmi! And Siwon! AND HYUKJAE BEING ALL DELICATE AND AND. kjsd!! Zhoumi is sneaky and amazing and I love him lots. ♥

[shieldkitten]

YOU MUST BE KIDDING.

<3333 I never want Zhoumi to leave. Will you be so mad at me if I make this Hyukmi instead of Shihyuk? *gets shot*

[aconite]

DOES THAT MEAN YOU WILL NOT BE SHARING YOUR SECRETS?? ):

I love him and his deviousness. <33 UM. HYUKMI! I WANT HYUKMI! AND SHIHYUK. BOTH. AT THE SAME TIME. Or...or not. You know, unless you could be bribed into it or something. But Zhoumi thinks Hyukjae is cute! And Siwon is all manly and chivalrous! And and and I keep rereading everything because omg. ♥!!

[shieldkitten]

I HAVE NO SECRETS TO MATCH YOUR OWN!!!

I was just kidding, really, it will be Shihyuk, but there will be blatant Hyukmi all over the place before it is!

[cynicalxcharm]

YAY TIME FOR SEXY SWINDLER AND ENCHANTING ESCAPEE ACTION! YESSSSSSS

[shieldkitten]

THE CYNICAL CAPTAIN WILL BE JEALOUS.

[cynicalxcharm]

BUT IT'S OK, BECAUSE THE SOFTSPOKEN SLAVE WILL BE THERE TO CALM HIM DOWN AND POINT HIM IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION. (E.E.'s bedroom, of course.)

[phasera]

eeeee you're putting out chapters so quickly! ^___^ THIS MAKES ME HAPPY. poor Hyukjae--he swooned! someone fetch the smelling salts!

“You mean some other lecherous sailor,” Siwon said drily, lifting Eunhyuk up in his arms.

*dies all over this line* the hyukmi! and then the shiwon carrying delicate!hyuk in his strong and manly arms~~~~ ♥

[shieldkitten]

you're putting out chapters so quickly! ^___^ THIS MAKES ME HAPPY

This should also inspire you to similar acts of speedy chapter putting out, yes, yes, yes?

[phasera]

hey, i write like the wind! :o my co-author, on the other hand... >_>

[kayevelyn]

Hahaha! Eunhyuk fainted! Gold digger Zhou Mi! Ah he's so sleazy but in a good way. I can see him totally going "you know you don't regret me doing it" at the end after Siwon and Eunhyukl discover their passionate love for one another.

And it totally didn't suck. I highly enjoyed it!

[shieldkitten]

Thank you for your kind words~ I still think it sucked, though >.

[kwong521]

[shieldkitten]

Hahaha thank you! At least he doesn't die or act emo in this one.