Our Little Wilkins (Part 2 of 2)

Jul 29, 2007 09:41


Title: Three Months Later: Our Little Wilkins (Part 2 of 2)
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Deathly Hallows
Rating: PG-13 for mild language and content
Characters/Pairings: Ron/Hermione, Mr. & Mrs. Granger, Kingsley, Tonks
Summary: A baby's cry from upstairs makes Hermione realize that her plans were anything but simple

Notes: This is part two of two for this ( Read more... )

potter, fanfic, aftertheflaw

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emmyniem July 30 2007, 23:54:51 UTC
I just have to say that this story was very very enjoyable for me to read.

Your plot, chracterization, and writing style is just perfect.

I would compliment you more, but I do not have time at the moment.

Just know that I think you have a wonderful talent.

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kanedax July 31 2007, 00:39:35 UTC
Well, if you want to come back later and compliment me, I won't complain. ;)

Seriously, though, thank you for reading and commenting on this story. It's always good to see new readers joining in.

I love the icon, btw.

And if you wanna compliment, tell your friends you just read a really cool story about Hermione's new sister. Popularity is a compliment, too. ;)

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emmyniem August 1 2007, 21:41:24 UTC
I wasn't planning on coming back to re-comments but then in my car on the way home from lunch today for some reason the line that Tonks says to Hermione in the first part of this story popped into my head. The one about telling Ron how she isn't wearing anything under her cloths and that that will for sure drive him nuts. It made me smile and for some odd reason I just had to come back and let you know that.

Also the part with him being to so good with children just makes my heart swell! It was somehow so suprising yet so Ron. There is nothing sexier than a man who is good with kids. I may now have to go write a Ron/Rose fic.

I would totally tell my friends to read this, if I had any friends who read FanFiction, which I don't, so sorry!

Thanks on the icon compliment as well.

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kanedax August 1 2007, 22:58:45 UTC
Heeheehee... sometimes it's the naughty talk that comes back to haunt you. ;)

I always thought he'd be decent with kids. The fact that he's so protective about Ginny kinda shows that he's not the type who hates little ones. And I had an ex-girlfriend tell me about the "good with kids" thing, so I thought it was true enough to have Hermione think.

Not problem about the friends. Heck, I've had so many comments between this one and After The Flaw, but I haven't been able to talk any of MY friends into reading them, either! If you wanna read more of my stuff, though, the link to my Fanfiction page is up at the top of my LJ.

Thanks for coming back!

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anonymous July 31 2007, 08:05:01 UTC
This is really fantastic. Are you done with it, or is there more to come?

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kanedax July 31 2007, 12:56:51 UTC
I'm done with this particular story, but it becomes part of my canon. So Hermione Caroline Granger will be making some appearances in future work that I do. Right now I'm plotting out a Harry/Ginny/Ron/Hermione double wedding fic, and she'll definitely be there. I'll expand the story about the rest of the Grangers at that point, too.

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samtabsav August 1 2007, 03:10:39 UTC
This was brilliant! I'm finding myself falling in love with your Potter fics, I think.

*tugs on your pant leg* MORE POST-DH FICCCCCCC.

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kanedax August 1 2007, 13:00:35 UTC
More is coming. It's just going to be, um, a little more involved than the previous two, so it's taking more planning.

And thanks. It's nice to know someone's falling in love with at least SOME part of me. ;)

If you want to read some of my pre-DH fic, the "My Fanfic Page" link at the top of my page throws you over to my many many works of post-HBP fic. AU, obviously, but still good...

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gregoria44 August 5 2007, 19:58:34 UTC
The details that JK forgot in this are just brill! I loved the whole thing with how the clothes H is wearing will be a problem when she becomes Harry, and the fact that her undercrackers are plain and practical!!

Also the correlation between the Weasley's ever growing family and Ron's abilities with the baby, very clever.

Ah, sod it, I loved it all!

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kanedax August 5 2007, 21:07:57 UTC
Quite possibly the most British comment I've ever received. "Undercrackers." I'll have to remember that one.

Thanks for going back and reading my older work after "How To Survive". If you want to try any of my other work, the link down at the bottom of the story takes you to a list of all of my work. Lots of post-HBP Potter, lots of X-Men, and a healthy smattering of Buffy and others mixed in there.

No slash, though, sorry. ;)

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makeroftomorrow August 9 2007, 18:06:58 UTC
Since I recently read Fifteen Minutes Later, figured I may as well catch up on everything. So, I read both parts of Three Months Later!

I loved Three Months Later. They way you wrapped the songs into everything was absolutely fantastic. There were parts that honestly have me wanting to cry. (This coming from a guy who can't bring himself to cry at his uncle's funeral.) It was really sweet to see Ron and Hermione with Little Caroline. And I loved all the talk about diaper changing. It made me laugh a lot.

I really have no complaints with this fic. Seems quite common when I comment on your writing Kanedex. But that's a good thing! Keep up the good work. I'd be interested to see Ron's proposal. I do hope that you write that piece at one point. And you -have- to eventually write all the wedding pieces. I want to see how you do!

Keep up the work Kanedex. You're quickly becoming one of my favorite authors around! (And I don't mean just for the HP Fan Fictions.) ^_____^

~Maker Of Tomorrow

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kanedax August 9 2007, 18:40:04 UTC
Oh, the wedding fic is DEFINITELY going to be written. Acutally, it was the first piece that was on my list to write when I was done with After The Flaw. Then everything slowly started mutating and, next thing I know, it's probably going to be another three or four chapters away, minimum. I'm aiming at it hitting around the "Four Years Later" mark. 2002ish will put them at an age young enough to still make it seem like they're still trying to figure out where they are, but old enough to have James without a four or five year gap.

Harry and Ginny are too horny to wait too long.

Wait, did I say that? lol

Thanks for reading again!

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