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kandigurl

Resolution (LJ Idol Topic 1)

Sep 28, 2019 12:27

We'll only write at midnight and we'll always do it late ( Read more... )

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i_love_freddie September 28 2019, 19:10:28 UTC

Ha, this was a good one!

static_abyss September 28 2019, 20:41:59 UTC

This was excellent! And so playful because of the rhyming scheme. I especially love that last stanza.

kehlen September 28 2019, 20:52:50 UTC

Ooh, this was a lot of fun to read!

alexanderscttb September 28 2019, 23:05:50 UTC

Ha ha ha. This was great. I liked the alternating between long lines that were very talky and then short, almost haikuy segments. Kind of like a heavily real subversion of the sometimes very naive ethos of poetry.

nikkiii_brown September 29 2019, 10:59:44 UTC

"To be an adult"

The worst thing I ever did! Haha.
Really enjoyed this!