Comments | kaminikaku: The Business of Bonds 3/3

kaminikaku

The Business of Bonds 3/3

Feb 23, 2014 00:38

( Ryo looks up as he walks in the door. “I see,” he says. “See what?” Jin asks. “Jin and Kame sitting in a tree, K I S S-” “Shut up!” Ryo almost laughs at the blush that covers Jin's neck and face, and the smile he is trying to hide. “Why?” Ryo asks. “Am I wrong? Should it be F U C-” )

au, drama, g:kat-tun, c:koki, c:jin, c:ohkura, fic, a_sfic, g:akanishi jin, c:kame, rating:r, c:ryo, p:akame, c:koyama

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kaminikaku February 27 2014, 15:59:45 UTC

Thanks for reading :) I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, and I had so much fun playing with these characters.

ecatheriina February 22 2014, 19:21:47 UTC

Wonderful ;___________; <3
Thank you for sharing!

(btw, you killed Junno! u mean! XD)

kaminikaku February 27 2014, 16:01:46 UTC

Thanks for reading! I had a great time writing this. Sorry for killing Junno...I didn't want to, but I needed something to show how serious the situation was, and if everyone had lived it would have seemed a little anti-climactic. TBH it was almost Koki, but then I thought Koki and Kame waiting together outside was even worse a fate. (sorry I'm displaying DoS tendencies!)

chained_akame February 22 2014, 21:04:16 UTC

This was amazing. I seriously have no words to describe it, if I actually start, I don't think I'll be done soon. I loved it, especially the 3rd part. You gave me both happy and sad feelings, but I don't regret reading it.

It was great, thank you so much for writing it :)

kaminikaku February 27 2014, 16:02:50 UTC

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really wanted there to be happy times for both of them, and the prompt was going to be angsty, so i really tried to balance it out! Thanks for commenting I appreciate it <3

akame_koi13 February 22 2014, 23:27:30 UTC

The explosion was so unexpected! Poor Jin, things just keep getting worse for him and his legs. But Kame will take care of him, ne. Will you write a sequel to this?

kaminikaku February 27 2014, 16:04:57 UTC

Yes it was unexpected! The explosion scene was my actual prompt, so I always knew it was going to be there, but the timeline for Kame learning about it was a bit of a surprise for me too! I thought they were both going to be there, but then.... muse said no, it happens this way.
Yes poor Jin, but he is strong and determined and he will do his best, and Kame knows how he feels now, so I am sure he will take care of him. Sequel... maybe? I've had a few questions about what happens next. I shall see what happens as I have some ideas....

anthonny February 23 2014, 15:43:09 UTC

thank you

kaminikaku February 27 2014, 16:05:13 UTC

you're welcome! thanks for reading!