Shadows 04

[kamawe_takami]

As promised, here's the next chapter. Hope you'll enjoy :)

A/N: To avoid confusions: When I'm writing scenes with Dean as a child and teenager, I'm visualizing Jensen Ackles (thus the blonde hair, etc.), not the actors that played him.

Comments

[axia_85]

My God, this is so lovely!
Dean is gonna kill Sam right? XD

[kamawe_takami]

Thank you ♥
... if Benny doesn't kill Sam first xD

[monteseverus]

I just found these wonderful stories and have to say they are breaking my heart. You have captured each character so well. And poor Dean's life being revealed to his brother and friends will just kill him. Fantastic job with these! Looking forward to more.

[kamawe_takami]

Thank you so much! I try to imagine the characters while writing the scenes, and always ask myself: "Would they do/say that if something like this happened?" Glad to hear my stategy works :D

[butterfly1onch]

very interesting story, really looking forward to more.

[kamawe_takami]

Thank you :)

Lovely

[jankjay]

I'm so happy I stumbled onto these stories from a rec site. I love your premise and this may be the first time I've seen Benny written by a fan who seemed to really get the character . Really well done. Congrats . Also, if you hadn't told me you weren't a native English speaker I wouldn't have known. Very nicely done all the way around.

Re: Lovely

[kamawe_takami]

I'm so happy that you're happy :D Thank you so much for the compliments ♥ I often doubt my writing style because, let's be honest, I'm not able to 'feel' the sentences and the structures as a native speaker would. So it's awesome to know it doesn't suck so much ^^ Thanks again.

[ext_2217766]

I NEED more

[kamawe_takami]

Hehe, glad you liked it ^^ I'll just check the next chapter over one more time, send it to my beta (so there're not too many ugly mistakes) and then post it right away :)