Comments | kalyw: Strachey Mysteries Fic - If the Fates Allow (2/2)

kalyw

Strachey Mysteries Fic - If the Fates Allow (2/2)

Dec 28, 2009 17:39

Title: If the Fates Allow ( Read more... )

dss_fic, strachey series, fanfic, tim_don_athon

Comments 8

jenna_hilary January 6 2010, 14:41:18 UTC

I really like the pacing of this second part. It could so easily have been a bit slow, but you introduce various elements along the way to keep the storyline moving, such as the phone call to Bub, and then the conversation with Kelly.

I really have enjoyed reading this story. Thanks so much for writing and sharing! I hope you had a very Happy Holiday season!
yours,
Jenna

kalyw January 7 2010, 02:57:16 UTC

Thank you so much for such complimentary feedback - I'm thrilled you enjoyed reading it so much, and I appreciate you taking the time to say so. Glad you liked it!

lady529 January 7 2010, 02:31:57 UTC

Very nice fic, thoroughly enjoyed it!

The Lady 529

kalyw January 7 2010, 02:57:43 UTC

Very glad to hear it - thanks for commenting! :)

unavez18 August 16 2010, 04:20:39 UTC

Great, compelling story

kalyw October 6 2010, 01:23:25 UTC

Thanks so much. :-)

(Sorry for the lag in reply!)

tingreca March 2 2012, 02:29:13 UTC

I'm new to DSM and thoroughly enjoying myself. Just wanted to tell you I enjoyed your story very much.

ursula2 June 17 2012, 02:37:15 UTC

Thank you for your stories. I have read this one very often and I love it. You have captured Timmy´s angst and emotions very beautifully.