i wish i'd gotten around to commenting during the exchange but anyway this is so, so good! your characterization is on point, and i love that it's the characterization that forms the basis for the humour (jinwoo's inability to make a "your mom" joke was so so subtle and perfect). the entire thing is so funny, oh my god, i was howling.
it's so touching in parts, too! you establish each individual relationship so well and it's great to see them all play out. i loved how you drew on kangnam's rl backgrounds for their relationship (“You know, Taehyun, I was your age once-” “Four months ago” was hilarious and can i get some rival iljin ar fic please), and the way you summarize mino and jinwoo's relationship in all of the little details is heartbreaking. also can i just say i love jinwoo in this (i love jinwoo...) “You know you do that thing where you’re like wide awake one second, and then when I blink you’re snoring?” THIS IS A PERFECT DESCRIPTION
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omg no worries, thank you so much for taking the time to read this!! i'm SO RELIEVED that you think my characterisation was well attempted, i was so nervous :C winner are all so individualistic and nuanced AND REAL, even though i'm a big fan i feel like i have no idea how to write them u___u likewise i'm glad the humour worked with you too and you didn't get mood whiplash~
can i get some rival iljin ar fic please omg... i really want kangnam iljin au where ksy is like, a reformed iljin trying to better himself for his mum, and taehyun is a lone wolf iljin and ksy just wants to help him :C school 2013 kangnam au >___< i'm glad you liked jinwoo in this because BY FAR he is the HARDEST to write. i love jinwoo too, but it's so difficult to kind of... not make him too airy so it's cartoonish, but still maintaining that as a strong part of his personality but in a more realistic way. he's so hard to get down, but i'm glad you liked his characterisation!!
thank you so much for your lovely comment!! <333 i love your fic and was rly happy to
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I cannot believe I’m about to gush about how much I loved a winner fic, but that’s exactly what I’m about to do u__u purely for my own sake (winner??? is that a new group? sounds familiar), I’m going to pretend I’m totally chill, pls humour me
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i've literally been staring at this comment for days and i have no idea how to reply to it. 1) IT IS WAY TOO NICE AND I DO NOT DESERVE IT??? 2) honestly anything this fic is it is thanks to you T___T i'm honestly amazed you found the patience to read it a SECOND time after all the burden i dumped on you while trying to finish this fic.
honestly i'm so so glad that the structure worked for you? when i finished this i really didn't have time to check the flow of the scenes that well, and you know how i like... ambiguously assigned scenes here and there, so i'm so relieved that it came together well. Ngl, around the halfway mark I still had no clue where it was going, and I think if I didn’t witness it myself, I would never have believed it could look as messy as it did at some points. omg this is... it's so nice T___T it means so much to me. and lmao maybe that's why you like the fic because you honestly saw it at it's lowest, messiest, most convoluted point, and literally it could only go up from there. waaah, honestly thank you so
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This was such a delightful fic! I love that you made YG the villain (because OF COURSE, who else in k-pop?) and that Seunghoon's "love" turned out to be his chihuahua, haha. Also that you made CL and Seungri police officers bc a tiny bit of me will always be a Ririn shipper, hehe
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it's so touching in parts, too! you establish each individual relationship so well and it's great to see them all play out. i loved how you drew on kangnam's rl backgrounds for their relationship (“You know, Taehyun, I was your age once-” “Four months ago” was hilarious and can i get some rival iljin ar fic please), and the way you summarize mino and jinwoo's relationship in all of the little details is heartbreaking. also can i just say i love jinwoo in this (i love jinwoo...) “You know you do that thing where you’re like wide awake one second, and then when I blink you’re snoring?” THIS IS A PERFECT DESCRIPTION ( ... )
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can i get some rival iljin ar fic please omg... i really want kangnam iljin au where ksy is like, a reformed iljin trying to better himself for his mum, and taehyun is a lone wolf iljin and ksy just wants to help him :C school 2013 kangnam au >___< i'm glad you liked jinwoo in this because BY FAR he is the HARDEST to write. i love jinwoo too, but it's so difficult to kind of... not make him too airy so it's cartoonish, but still maintaining that as a strong part of his personality but in a more realistic way. he's so hard to get down, but i'm glad you liked his characterisation!!
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honestly i'm so so glad that the structure worked for you? when i finished this i really didn't have time to check the flow of the scenes that well, and you know how i like... ambiguously assigned scenes here and there, so i'm so relieved that it came together well. Ngl, around the halfway mark I still had no clue where it was going, and I think if I didn’t witness it myself, I would never have believed it could look as messy as it did at some points. omg this is... it's so nice T___T it means so much to me. and lmao maybe that's why you like the fic because you honestly saw it at it's lowest, messiest, most convoluted point, and literally it could only go up from there. waaah, honestly thank you so ( ... )
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