[Fic] The Lemon Song - Sam (POV), Dean; 9x12 tag

[kalliel]

Title: The Lemon Song [AO3]
Genre: gen
Characters: Sam (POV), Dean
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1560
Summary: Sam doesn't expect more; neither of them do. The twenty hours after 9x12.
Notes: "The Lemon Song" follows "What Is And What Should Never Be" on the album, Led Zeppelin II.

Comments

[caranfindel]

Sequel posted! It's very talky.
http://caranfindel.livejournal.com/11491.html

[kalliel]

AGAIN, ♥ ♥ ♥!

[pocochina]

ooooh, this is a great Sam voice. I like the use of his lack of stuff at the end of the last episode, how he doesn't have anything to fall back on or distract him from everything.

[kalliel]

I will confess a true obsession with that kind of thing. And it was just kind of fun to play with Sam without those, what, material staples? I'm glad Sam's voice here rang true for you. Thank you for reading!

[harrigan]

You *get* these guys! This rings so true... and I actually find it very positive. Sam isn't ready to be brothers yet... but he brought a pillow! (Hugs this tight!)

[kalliel]

When I first wrote it, I thought it was maybe even too positive! And then I read it the next morning and I was like, lol, no, still too sad to be too positive. XP And yesss, hug that pillow tight! You too, Sam. <333

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, and for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed.

[i_speak_tongue]

I love this idea of duality, wrt both Sam and Dean. And I love THIS to death. Beautiful.

[kalliel]

Thank you, bb. <3 Always with their Worst/Best things, these two. Again, thank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed!

[frozen_delight]

I have so much admiration for people who can write a good Sam POV and you're obviously one of them. This was really beautiful, many amazing lines and I really liked how you handled the conversation between the two brothers. Their voices ring true and there's the right dose of eternal unhappiness and lack of understanding that those two simply can't do without, but at the same time you actually manage to make them talk and I rather preferred the result to the somewhat lame conversation on screen. Well done!

I'm just getting into SPN and am now really looking forward to discovering more of your fics.

[kalliel]

This is such a gorgeous comment. <3 Thank you so much, especially about Sam's POV here, since it's one that's near and dear to my heart. You make me blush, though. :3

Again, thank you for reading! And I'm glad you enjoyed this.