C'est La Vie number four!
Here, everyone. Have some disciple filler.
Title: C'est La Vie!
Author: kaliona
Characters: Canada, France, England, America, mentions of Spain, many more characters to be introduced in future chapters
Rating: PG-13
Summary: College Student!Matthew has come across a wonderful scholarship, but his brother's roommate's family has already paid for all of his ( Read more... )
Title: C'est La Vie!
Author: kaliona
Characters: Canada, France, England, America, mentions of Spain, many more characters to be introduced in future chapters
Rating: PG-13
Summary: College Student!Matthew has come across a wonderful scholarship, but his brother's roommate's family has already paid for all of his ( Read more... )
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I love the whole tone of this fic and can't wait to see how it turns out (And also, I love your Denmark~ <3) Also loving the police force and their dynamics - it'll be interesting to see more of them! ^^
I also thought that your characterisation of Francis was great; I loved how dismissive he seems in this chapter and how he just seems to think that Mattie is cute in the previous ones... I think it's a fair portrayal, especially since they haven't known each other for long at all =D
Also, in the sentence "Actually, he did more staring at Francis that at the city" I think you meant "than" at the city. ^^
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Writing Francis can be a bit tricky sometimes, especially here where he has to be all super mysterious when he's really kind of a goofball. <33 thank you for commenting, too!
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