Fic: Constantly Draco (Draco/Hermione) Chapter 2

[kalina_blue]

Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter and I don't make any money with this.

Title: Constantly Draco 2/3
Author: kalina_blue
Rating: R
Pairing: Draco/Hermione
Word Count: 4115
Summary: After the war Hermione returns to Hogwarts to finish her education, but picking up where she had left and forgetting the war isn't all that easy. Sometimes a friendship

Comments

[slytherinlaurel]

Very nice! I really enjoyed the exchange about her crying; both characters felt very authentic.

[kalina_blue]

Thank you. I always try to make them sound as real and authentic as possible

[hppyflwr]

I am so loving this fiction. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I love how your keeping Draco in character. Really really loving your work.

[kalina_blue]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm really glad you think I keep Draco in character. That isn't always easy to do with a story set-up like this.

[eau_bleu]

I really like your story. You have a wonderful writing style and the quality is top notch.
The only error I can spot is the reference to "nineteeth century".Currently, we are in the twentifirst century.
So, if H and D are doing a project on Unforgivables in the nineteeth century, you're talking about the 1800's.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/19th_century
Keep up the excellent work. Look forward to more of your story.
EB

[kalina_blue]

Thanks for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoy my story.

The reference to the nineteenth century isn't a mistake though. The story takes place during Hermione's 'eigth' year at Hogwarts, which means it is 1998 (book seven takes place 1997/1998). Therefore they live in the twentieth century and they got assigned the century before that.

[mkhtl]

I am really enjoying reading this - I like your Draco very much - awful, yet redeemable. Your style flows very pleasantly - I look forward to the conclusion!