Ray/OFC, 1/2samescenesJanuary 27 2011, 07:23:39 UTC
la la la whatever, and I hate you. I don't have time for this!
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When you open the door he’s standing there in civilian clothes, those fucking glasses pushed up on his head. He’s squinting in the sun, and he looks just like you remember. You don’t know if you really expected him to come back damaged, twitching and angry - and, okay, you’ve watched Platoon too many times even though Ray has told you it’s nothing like that. Anymore. He just looks like he’s lost a few pounds, that’s all.
“Hey babe,” he says, grinning. He winks at you saucily. Saucily, ugh. You hate him
( ... )
Re: Ray/OFC, 2/2samescenesJanuary 27 2011, 07:24:11 UTC
It’s cooler in your bedroom with the blinds closed and door shut, even though the ancient fan makes an annoying racket when it’s turned up high. Ray strips off your top, kissing you briefly when your face reappears, and pushes your cutoffs and your panties down over your knees. His hand stays on your hip when you step out of them, kicking them into a corner
( ... )
Re: Ray/OFC, 2/2witchlingJanuary 27 2011, 21:22:14 UTC
BB. Babe. What did I do to deserve you? I love your Ray, as always and this is so simultaneously sweet and sexy. The second person is totally the right POV for this story because, well - gratuitous self insertion is easier.
Re: Ray/OFC, 2/2samescenesJanuary 27 2011, 21:44:07 UTC
Ahaha, it's not very porny, so I thought I'd overcompensate with the sweet stuff. And when I started writing, I stopped and thought, you know who would appreciate second person? Kayla would. So, here we are.
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When you open the door he’s standing there in civilian clothes, those fucking glasses pushed up on his head. He’s squinting in the sun, and he looks just like you remember. You don’t know if you really expected him to come back damaged, twitching and angry - and, okay, you’ve watched Platoon too many times even though Ray has told you it’s nothing like that. Anymore. He just looks like he’s lost a few pounds, that’s all.
“Hey babe,” he says, grinning. He winks at you saucily. Saucily, ugh. You hate him ( ... )
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