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Follow

Mar 14, 2006 20:00

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Title: Follow
Author: ModestyRabnott
Format: Ficlet (WC = 595)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Very minor language
Song Prompt: Ringside, “Tired of Being Sorry”
Word Prompt: Ruin
Summary: A late summer night near the forest. Two people adept at tracking play a tired game of cat and mouse.

( Follow )

ringside, angst, march

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modestyrabnott March 15 2006, 18:57:19 UTC

Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it. Sorry about the pesky LJ cut. Gah!

freakinwinky March 15 2006, 21:23:20 UTC

Besides the little lj-cut issue, (don't worry, it does that to me too), this peice was very well done. It felt very mature to me, the setting giving it an almost dark edge.The angst was perfect and not over done at all. I especially enjoyed the very subtle sensuality mixed in with the discription of her scent. Excelent job!

ohginnyfan March 16 2006, 11:09:47 UTC

Wow, this was very powerful - full of emotions and angst.

“Then you’ll kill me as well. Can you live with that, Remus?” When I lift my head at last to look at her, she is already walking away, back toward the dim lights of the town.

*sob*

Very nice job.