loveage_above's Entry: Jealous Of Your Cigarette

Oct 28, 2010 22:31



Rating: Definitely a BIG M!

Word length: 2059

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor do I own the title to this song, but I’m sure Hawksley Workman can get into a sweaty wrestling match over it with me. No, really. I’m game.

For Nimbl, and all the wonderful writers at the LJ!

It started with a bang. Sakura’s day was often riddled with various noises ( Read more... )

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eldrfire October 30 2010, 00:12:19 UTC
Good job, I liked how she thought about her day in terms of how it had started and how it had ended. I also liked Ms. Kunoichi's romantic history.

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starlightdawn October 30 2010, 11:13:44 UTC
I'll admit that I blushed for Sakura. Talk about compromising positions. And was that a James Bond reference I spied up there? - I feel the Austin Powers reply may be needed. (You may be a cunning linguist, but I'm a master debater.) Good job!

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moldycookies October 30 2010, 20:21:54 UTC
lolwut, smut? :DDD

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juniper_11 October 30 2010, 23:31:36 UTC
Definite eye popper. My eyes jumped out of my head when Sakura's foot began doing...things.

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gothirishrose October 31 2010, 15:23:44 UTC
Nosebleed!

I liked this one. You're a tease, though... closing the door on us and having us miss out on quite a bit (well, five hours' worth might be a bit too much... nah, not really) then bringing us back in on the scene when she's smoking her cigarette. I like to think Kakashi joins her for one... And I want to know just how much she put her neighbors to shame. Bet Kakashi made her sing.

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nari_lightning October 31 2010, 18:05:48 UTC
if i could 'like' this i totally would XD

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